tell me what u think, i know i got some problems in here but just help me out where i can be better, And i just started like 1 month ago
Ay yo
I cut with razor blades//
like shoulder blades//
See the line that i made//
down ur vertabrate//
Its ok//
But u might die the next day//
Like Eminem said to Dre" Yall betta make way"//
U still cant comprehend the words that i spit//
U 4got who this is... its Spittin Quik//
Comin through with this shit//
Im like a mechanical pencil//
Pushed in 2 feed u lead//
With letter stencils//
Put Quik initials in yo head//
Cuz im that nice//
Leavin niggas shook out they draws like the Poltergiest//
And ill leave u spirtually hopeless/
Like a T.V show with no hostess//
And what i tell u.. i won this battle//
Here u go post this//