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TEK-NIK 5 100.00%
Hypnotic 0 0%
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Old 05-30-06, 04:10 PM   #16
Hypnotic
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20 Lines?
Why Not Do 10Lines...No More No Les?...
 
Old 05-31-06, 02:59 AM   #17
Knight SirRebral
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Voted For: TEK-NIK

Ya rhymes a mystery,put the peices together,its worth the trouble
.....Whackness is'nt a peice or your life ...its the whole fuckin puzzle

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basically nothing


those were just blindly aimed insults,hypnotc needs to up his game for real...sorry

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Old 05-31-06, 12:41 PM   #18
The Creator
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Voted For: TEK-NIK

oh my fucking god....here is how it goes...I'lll break it down....

Call me King Cronus, I destroy herbs who show slowness
N' I'll put so much Moss on ya body the raiders'll give ya a signing bonus
FIRST LINE WAS WAK AND NOT A GOOD OPENER...2ND WAS OK BUT NEEDED WORK....

You ain't higly regarded, punk ya fuckin' retarded
Fuck Wal-Mart, bitch ya lame punches ain't even on Target
1ST LINE WAS JUST A FILLER....2ND WAS GOOD...

Ya rhymes a mystery,put the peices together,its worth the trouble
.....Whackness is'nt a peice or your life ...its the whole fuckin puzzle
GOOD 1ST LINE...IT SET HIM UP FOR THE CLOSER... NICE.

Yo Tek, Your Rhymes Are A Wreck, Your Rhymes Anit Trec*
Your Raps Are Lame, Your Shit, My Rhymes Break Ya Neck
WAK.........
Yo Nik, Step Away From Da Mic, You Think Your Good But Its A Trick
You Think You Sick, But Your Slick**, Your Just A Little Boy Without A Dick
WAK...........
Yo, Ya Lame, Your Never Gonna Get Into Fame, Never Gonna Reach Ya Aim
WAK............
Your Lyrics Dissapear Like A Burnt Out Flame, Your Just A Shame.
WAK WAK WAK...............

Tek gets this easy cuz hyp dont know how to battle at all. yo take the time to vote on one of the battles on my sig.
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Old 05-31-06, 01:36 PM   #19
TEK-NIK
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thanks for the votes uppin ....
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Old 05-31-06, 03:34 PM   #20
Hypnotic
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Eh, I Lost My Skillz .............................
 
Old 05-31-06, 06:56 PM   #21
The Creator
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sorry for free posting but can I get an honest vote in a battle in my sig...
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Old 05-31-06, 08:47 PM   #22
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uppin for more votes fuckin 50 charactor shit blah
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Old 06-01-06, 01:06 AM   #23
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Lmfao.....................Its So early............
 
Old 06-01-06, 12:09 PM   #24
TEK-NIK
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upppinnn for votes......................................
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Old 06-02-06, 07:04 PM   #25
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upp............................................... .....................
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Old 06-02-06, 07:13 PM   #26
noname
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Voted For: TEK-NIK

Well,easy call here...

TeK-NiK got it.Only one was the 4th line.The Target thing,I'm pretty sure I've seen before.So that was played.
But the rest was good.I esspeccially like the Moss/Raiders thing.

As for Hypnotic.To me,it' seems as though you were just rhyming words,and nothing else.It had very little content what so ever.And that one that said "your a little boy without a dick"..<---SOOOOOO CHESSY and Lame.

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Old 06-05-06, 04:36 PM   #27
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This was feedback posted for Hypnotic

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no comment...


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Old 06-09-06, 12:59 AM   #28
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hay I voted on this battle....do u mind voting honestly on mine and if u do....try to drop a legit vote cuz this dude thinks I got Dick riders and will try to dq every one who votes for me untill the entire site has voted and there is no one left to dq.....lol...heres the link...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229492
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Old 06-09-06, 10:15 AM   #29
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Voted For: TEK-NIK

Well all in all, both verses to me were quite played. Yet it's better to have a few played punchlines (as Tek-Nik) did than to have none (as Hypnotic did).

Hypnotic: What's up with that first punchline nigga? Made absolutely NO sense. Shit was like fuckin' nursery rhymes. You on that Hickory Dickory Dock shit...

Tek-Nik: Yo, ya opening lines were alright, no lie. But Tell me why:
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Fuck Wal-Mart, bitch ya lame punches ain't even on Target

-Did you have to kill it with this line. Never in your life should you make references to discount megastores again.
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Old 06-09-06, 04:11 PM   #30
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Voted For: TEK-NIK

Tek got this one.... hypnotic- ur punches were fair, but flow was haphazard... tek had sick punces, like the Target line, and flowed well...
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