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08-03-08, 10:33 PM | #1 | |||||
don't try.
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LFS (6) vs Ghostface (3)
IP: 534F DFE5
LFS vs Ghostface
Due times: Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST. - if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes. Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific. Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late. Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent. Line limits: 10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts. Voting: Must post THREE links of you voting into your check in, or its minus ONE vote for each missing link. If you want to win, then vote or you will most likely lose. Goodluck.
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08-05-08, 07:15 PM | #2 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
check. i'm gonna just drop my verse tonight/tommorow early lol. 10 lines.
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08-06-08, 03:07 PM | #3 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: E2EE 59B6
check thats kool
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08-08-08, 09:03 AM | #4 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: A9AC 1AF3
i'm only droppin these 10 lines so i don't no-show,
got 15 minutes so all you voters can expect this to be so-so, see what i mean, but whatev here comes some predictable filler, i'ma beast on this lame dude, call me a ghostface killer, i'm betting you can tell that my heart just ain't in it this week, tryna equalize my life right now, this little dude is just me eq(meek), what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this, beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch, i apologize to all my boys who wanted me to come out hard, so lay or kirk or whoever, hit me back up when the playoffs start... bullshit i threw together to not get dq'd again. lol sorry the last few weeks have been shit, got a lot of stuff goin down.i'll probably be signin out for about a week, maybe 2.
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08-08-08, 07:52 PM | #5 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: DB36 F20E
yo i need an extension
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08-08-08, 07:59 PM | #6 | |||||
don't try.
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IP: 423F 6323
Extension granted, verse due Saturday by Midnight.
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08-08-08, 09:20 PM | #7 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: DB36 F20E
ok ok 1st off im tryin of yall using that same ghostfase killer line
its gettin old and jus by readin ur shit i can tell ive already wasted my time you came with no heat and thats why this battle will be easily captured my punches will leave this bitch deeply enraptured now u went and brought the bitches into the rap that was a little uncalled 4 only thing i wonderin is where you get ur bitches from ur corner store you came weak this time dog i actually heard you were pretty descent but like your girls ur knees got weak so you switched your style up now ur bent id really like 2 battle u again sometime when you can actually write something descent this rap isnt even worth 4 any1 2 add their 2 cents! srry jus finished my comp monitor at my house blew and my shit waz saved on there so i had 2 make a new rap
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08-08-08, 10:17 PM | #8 | |||||
don't try.
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IP: 423F 6323
what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this,
beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch, vs nothing. Veryy weak battle, LFS you didn't even have any good concepts..if you realize its an easy concepts its most likely played..but atleast you had an barelly okay line...which is mehish but in this battle it was the best bar. Sadly, but Ghost..ya need some work..your rhyme scheme was basic..your not really usin punches..kinda like statements.. the initial set up for a punch is.. Set up line..bla bla bla bla state a concept, .. - flip it. what you do is.. bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla.. v/ LFS ..ya'll need to step it up..See ya in a few weeks LFS
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08-09-08, 03:36 AM | #9 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: C5F9 BA42
i'm only droppin these 10 lines so i don't no-show,
got 15 minutes so all you voters can expect this to be so-so, see what i mean, but whatev here comes some predictable filler, i'ma beast on this lame dude, call me a ghostface killer, i'm betting you can tell that my heart just ain't in it this week, tryna equalize my life right now, this little dude is just me eq(meek), what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this, beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch, i apologize to all my boys who wanted me to come out hard, so lay or kirk or whoever, hit me back up when the playoffs start... (this verse was mainly a self prop and had some lines when you actually dissed yourself. I know you stated you didn’t have much free time to drop the verse, but you should work on you creativity a little more) verses ok ok 1st off im tryin of yall using that same ghostfase killer line its gettin old and jus by readin ur shit i can tell ive already wasted my time you came with no heat and thats why this battle will be easily captured my punches will leave this bitch deeply enraptured now u went and brought the bitches into the rap that was a little uncalled 4 only thing i wonderin is where you get ur bitches from ur corner store you came weak this time dog i actually heard you were pretty descent but like your girls ur knees got weak so you switched your style up now ur bent id really like 2 battle u again sometime when you can actually write something descent this rap isnt even worth 4 any1 2 add their 2 cents! (you need to work on the content of your verse. You had a lot of basic stuff, but the creativity is really missing out of your verse)/ Vote – LFS, for having a verse that had better content and forming slight better punches
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08-09-08, 04:35 AM | #10 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 7A3C 4FDE
wow how am i winning this? oh well i'm poofing again for a few weeks. be back for playoffs.
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08-09-08, 08:30 AM | #11 | |||||
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IP: 9E12 3286
v/LFS... honestly, all ghost needed to do was throw one, fairly decent, actually all it really had to be was a diss towards LFS... it never happened though, and LFS had one line
what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this, beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch, that was the best bar, holy fuck shit.
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08-09-08, 01:31 PM | #12 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
I have to agree with Kesse. Nothing worth quoting at all. But LFS just sucked less than Ghostface did. Ghostface, you need to work on everything, big time. LFS, you need to actually try, you fucker.
V/LFS. |
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08-09-08, 11:29 PM | #13 | ||||||
Herb
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IP: 2BA6 1F0F
So look, I was going to drop a breakdown vote like I always do. Shit though, I read through both verses and I ain't even going to waste my fucking time. I don't know either of these guys, but this battle was absolute trash. I hope that neither dropped to their fullest because if they did they should sign out because, WOW, and I mean that truly. There wasn't a single punch in either verse, just a bunch of statements and irrelevant ramblings that have no place in a text battle. I will say that LFS probably had the better of the two so-called "verses" so I will give this one to him. Both of you need to bring something next time though, I hate voting on garbage.
v/ - LFS, step it up though bro. |
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08-10-08, 06:12 PM | #14 | |||||
don't try.
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IP: EBB4 6039
LFS wins 5 - 0
LFS (9) and Ghostface (2)
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