hmmm its d/l...my life wtf? styles p comes to mind...
okay okay, its about to play....wtf paparazi?...
ur voice is weird...vocals is hella low dawg or r u whispering....nope theyre low, and ur sound sleep and weird...turn down the track or up ur vocals, i can not hear SHIT juss FUCK IT.....youre accent seems to hampering ur flow...ur talking soft with no emotion, up ur emotion, hook is FUCKED UP...kinda...thas it?

okay, yeh work on ur flow, get comfortable wiht it, speak louder and turn up ur vocals...
nice try i guess, keep going up...and dropping
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