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Old 11-27-05, 07:17 AM   #16
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dope beat, u flow wif it good. thas dope if it wuz really freestyled. quality wuz ehh aight, u know. good shit.

i like it.

rtf pleeze

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Old 11-27-05, 07:37 AM   #17
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Old 11-27-05, 10:12 AM   #18
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Ite listenin....for a freestyle it is really nice...like the flow...its hard to concentrate on flow and lyrics on a free...but fo what u did it was dope..presence and delivery on the mic again is brilliant...love the "ills" line..it is very dope for a freestyle...9.5/10 (for a freestyle obviously)
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Old 11-27-05, 10:13 AM   #19
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Old 11-27-05, 11:37 AM   #20
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this is pretty good dude, flow's getting better kyd, keep it up
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Old 11-27-05, 11:45 AM   #21
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Old 11-27-05, 01:08 PM   #22
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Listening...

I hate that beat...

Flow is choppy as hell in the beginning...it sounds unnaturally fast...Quality is meh...

Short...it was decent for a free...keep it up.
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Old 11-27-05, 01:13 PM   #23
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Old 11-27-05, 01:14 PM   #24
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I liek the beat. It's got an old b-boy feelin to it. Your mic sucks. The flow is on, but your mic is what's keeping your vocals sounding so long distance even though the volume is up. This is definitely a fun song. Oh also, when you spit fast, it sounded at fiorst liek you were in a rush to spit on the track and it showed in your emotion in the track. When you first started off, it was almost like I could hear you take a deep breath and then start spitting as fast as you could, then stop and steal another quick breath, and so on till you eventually calmed down and got comfortable on it. the lyrics them selves semed fitting, but damn, your mic blows. If the vocal quality was on, I'd pump it. 1


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Old 11-27-05, 01:18 PM   #25
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Ok,, not feeling the beat much..not my style.. ok, your flowing real nice on this..riding the beat well..for a freestyle is cool...quality aint to good..presence wasnt bad..could be better..voice got a lil annoyingat the end..think that was just because of your quality tho..but nice man
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Old 11-27-05, 01:20 PM   #26
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Both Of You thx A Lot

I Changed My NAme I Dunno Why Lol Umm..Ben Daniels My Real Name

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Old 11-27-05, 04:06 PM   #27
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Old 11-27-05, 06:01 PM   #28
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Old 11-27-05, 11:35 PM   #29
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SICK SHIT B. Daniel.

You might not remember me but it's Transkriptz.

FEELIN the flow a lot man good work homie
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