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Old 01-02-06, 05:30 AM   #1
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Old 01-03-06, 04:07 PM   #2
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look at this scene, its filled with mirrors
a manican trying to get her picture clear
she crawled from the streets, looking for answers
and found herself sprawling through sandy pastures
two trees, mark the spot where time depletes
the skeletal branches, guide the wings of the keepers
a nest of portals, gateways to an unknown world
where plastic becomes flesh, carried by boys and girls
but choose wisely, manican, for your fate will be choosen
wheater you will walk as man does, or forever be frozen
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Old 01-03-06, 11:48 PM   #3
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Desert of Endless Dreams

Lost in the phantom world, in the state of light true abyss.
This, the euphoric phase, ablaze, a stage of veracious bliss.
As she bended for a kiss, misses to fall into this mindframe.
Uninhabitated world, a blur to irreality itís the sign brain.
A defunct wastland, no two memories can even envision.
The descripition so plain, intruding ones own decision.
The blind womans reflection, wishing to see her own face.
Fated with this curse, struggles as fast pace, at this state.
Troubled, the astonishing piece of the disturbing abstract.
Seeing the whole face in the mirror, wishing to match that.
Seeming in this solemn state, as she moved involintarily.
No knowing she will begin to see her destiny momentarily.
Itís scary to know what happened, this dread for reality.
A calamity for a girl, wahat happened to me, this insanity.
Seeking for nothing, but moves toward the other mirrors
Desperate for consiousness, she goes in like a killer.
But she has no emotions, this notion for consious motion.
As she goes from wasteland to wasteland, no ocean.
Then she figures out, and this time sheís in a state of mind.
This fear, this horrific visualization, itís a make of crime.
And this place, all this hate, a mistake, this perilous state.
Itís reality, no escape a mind that shows a girl thatís been raped.
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Old 01-04-06, 04:42 PM   #4
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its actually, 'bent', but whatever
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Old 01-05-06, 07:25 PM   #5
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Old 01-15-06, 09:37 PM   #6
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I'm fallin apart at the seams
Tryin ta mend these broken dreams
Just like these broken wings
Or though it seems
I'm hangin by a thread, yet I'm controlled by stings
Stuck in this desert we call the sands of time
Lost n blind
I followed the foot prints I left behind
To only find
That they weren't mine
And now I'm faced with my misconception
Of direction
That my reflection
Was kind enough to mention
Unsure of the intentions
That lied within
I turned n grined
Only to begin
This journey again
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Old 01-17-06, 12:53 AM   #7
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mirrors are cool
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Old 01-17-06, 01:02 AM   #8
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Old 02-01-06, 10:52 PM   #9
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Nigga what it do
got all the others followin suit
got ulgy niggas thinkin how all da hoes b lookin at you
really cause the see the soul of a god
born again for jesuses revenge
commin back too a world where cream rules everything around me
so y aint i rule'n u?
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