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Old 06-20-04, 09:14 PM   #1
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shadow vs. ketch22

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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
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no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
 
Old 06-20-04, 09:56 PM   #2
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hahaha ketch 22 hahaha checkin in good luck
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Old 06-20-04, 11:21 PM   #3
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10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes"
he says he is a "good mc'ee".... he's even swears its the truth
if it wasnt 4 his dickriders he woulda been murderd by a newb!
has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse
ur rhymes arent "cutting the cake" ..u must b losing ur footing
ur rhymes are "full-of-shit".. and the "proof is in the pudding"
please leave "ketch".. this battle league wants "all jokes aside"
post ur weak rhymes in a skillet cuz they "bound to get fried"
ur "shit-verse" needs to be submited to a toilet. it "just reeks"
like a dinosaur.. after i kill him the wack mc'ees will b extinct
the only time this bitch "drops-hott-shit" is from his "bowel"
cant handle the fact that he's wack.......just throw in the towel!!
do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat



i could have put more links but i doubt hell even show!!
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Old 06-20-04, 11:28 PM   #4
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haha i spit on the first day i hope he shows up lol
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Old 06-21-04, 10:03 AM   #5
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check..lil cocky homie..i like eatin guys like that tho..1
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Old 06-23-04, 11:49 AM   #6
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damn dog u had more links than bob evans....thats a sign of a serious lack of creativity fam...but don't worry i show ya how ta elevate right here....


Quote:
Originally Posted by shadow
haha i spit on the first day i hope he shows up lol



You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision.

u set the wheels in motion, hope u can stop-what-u-started,
dude it Ain’t who's droppin first, its who droppin-the-hardest.

Since u wanna sin, got metaphors, multies & Spits-u’ll-Covet,
2 things you cant stop, my Natural Vigor & the initials-of-it.*

I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.****

Just like you name punk, ya Scripts, they got-no-substance,****
& Its ironic, cuz I’m hittin you, but Im takin shots-at-nothin.

You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**
Came ta R.B.ta be an mc but you shoulda stayed-in-the-band.***

got Talons in spades, be afraid of what Sprayed-out-of-the-mouth,***
but then again friend, ya used ta bein layed-out-on-the-ground.*****

As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******


not tryin to insult anyones intelligence w/explanation...
just wanna make sure ya feelin me..1

* N.V. = Envy
** stephin king wrote a book called IT
*** he says he lives in lincoln park in his profile.
**** shadows name plays
*****I jus got Accepted to A.I. his Crew
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Old 06-23-04, 01:12 PM   #7
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We all in AI so this vote should count.

Shadow my friend....dont act like a newbie...get rid of the "quotations" and links, and if u have to use a link make sure it has a point, some of ur lines with the links I read made me confused, I didnt see whay u used them. Prett basic verse, sorry pal but i didnt rate it much...ur best line...

please leave "ketch".. this battle league wants "all jokes aside"
post ur weak rhymes in a skillet cuz they "bound to get fried"

I would have to give this to shadow because at least his basic played punches were actual punches. weak battle and disapointed.

Vote=Shadow.

Both of u need to sort out ur wording aswell


still not good.

Ketch...ur doin newbie styles aswell with the whole-using-dashes-to break-up-text...DONT! You had some nices lines for wordplay but ur punches were weak as fuck. The envy line was decent but wasnt hard.
 
Old 06-23-04, 01:38 PM   #8
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Shadow

10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes"
ok....you could of used the 2nd line better
he says he is a "good mc'ee".... he's even swears its the truth
if it wasnt 4 his dickriders he woulda been murderd by a newb!
ok punch...
has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse
ok....could of done better with this one too
ur rhymes arent "cutting the cake" ..u must b losing ur footing
ur rhymes are "full-of-shit".. and the "proof is in the pudding"
ha ha...funny but didnt hit that hard
please leave "ketch".. this battle league wants "all jokes aside"
post ur weak rhymes in a skillet cuz they "bound to get fried"
ha ha...nice
ur "shit-verse" needs to be submited to a toilet. it "just reeks"
like a dinosaur.. after i kill him the wack mc'ees will b extinct
aight....ok line
the only time this bitch "drops-hott-shit" is from his "bowel"
cant handle the fact that he's wack.......just throw in the towel!!
ha ha..
do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat
alright closer

ive seen you come better than this....you didnt need most of those links
you HAD punches and some personals..overall flow wasnt bad either

overall: 6.5/10



Ketch 22

You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision.
ok.....not feelin it

u set the wheels in motion, hope u can stop-what-u-started,
dude it Ain’t who's droppin first, its who droppin-the-hardest.
ok...wheres the damn punch

Since u wanna sin, got metaphors, multies & Spits-u’ll-Covet,
2 things you cant stop, my Natural Vigor & the initials-of-it.*
ok......decent

I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.****
no....dont use shit like this

Just like you name punk, ya Scripts, they got-no-substance,****
& Its ironic, cuz I’m hittin you, but Im takin shots-at-nothin.
ok....a little better

You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**
Came ta R.B.ta be an mc but you shoulda stayed-in-the-band.***
ok.....
got Talons in spades, be afraid of what Sprayed-out-of-the-mouth,***
but then again friend, ya used ta bein layed-out-on-the-ground.*****
ha...ok

As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******
ok closer.

i think ive seen you do better than this....not sure....but your puunches
were real weak...wordplay was good though....but you puches didnt
connect...overall the flow was aight..


overall:6.0/10


Vote: Shadow...becuz his punches hit harder
 
Old 06-24-04, 03:59 PM   #9
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can u vote we all in the same crew so i guess it would be cool...thx fam
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Old 06-25-04, 08:54 AM   #10
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Old 06-25-04, 09:01 AM   #11
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breakdown for shadow:

flow:working alright some prety good internal rhymes at the start of it good job 7/10

volcab:alittle above basic but nothing to great 6/10

punches:some alright punches but mainly playd ideas like dick rider lines and shit try abit more on this part 5.5/10

overall:18.5/30

breakdown for ketch22:

flow:alittle sctreched on the bars some internal rhyming but not enough i felt 5.5/10

volcab:good use here no problems 6.5/10

punches:good lines better then your oppenent my fav,"You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**" good job here 8/10

overall:20/30

vote--ketch22
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Old 06-25-04, 12:31 PM   #12
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10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes"

nice open 9/10

has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse

consitant verse nice 9/10

do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat

Nice closer 8.4/10

You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision.

nice vocab 8.2/10

I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.****

kinda weak 7/10

As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******

not the best 8/10

winner-shadow
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Old 06-25-04, 11:18 PM   #13
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10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes" ok....
he says he is a "good mc'ee".... he's even swears its the truth
if it wasnt 4 his dickriders he woulda been murderd by a newb! doesnt rhyme
has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse ok...decent multie
ur rhymes arent "cutting the cake" ..u must b losing ur footing
ur rhymes are "full-of-shit".. and the "proof is in the pudding" nice wordplay
please leave "ketch".. this battle league wants "all jokes aside"
post ur weak rhymes in a skillet cuz they "bound to get fried" nice.....
ur "shit-verse" needs to be submited to a toilet. it "just reeks" played as fuck
like a dinosaur.. after i kill him the wack mc'ees will b extinct
the only time this bitch "drops-hott-shit" is from his "bowel"
cant handle the fact that he's wack.......just throw in the towel!! same played stuff
do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat nice closer....its decent
decent verse...not many multies or hard wordplay....you could have flowed better....but it seems like your losing your touch man.

You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision. better than his opener

u set the wheels in motion, hope u can stop-what-u-started,
dude it Ain’t who's droppin first, its who droppin-the-hardest. ok...

Since u wanna sin, got metaphors, multies & Spits-u’ll-Covet,
2 things you cant stop, my Natural Vigor & the initials-of-it.* nice...but man relate to shit that all audience knos i kno stephen kings a famous author but i doubt everyone here knos about him

I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.**** good attempt but not feeling it

Just like you name punk, ya Scripts, they got-no-substance,****
& Its ironic, cuz I’m hittin you, but Im takin shots-at-nothin. weak

You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**
Came ta R.B.ta be an mc but you shoulda stayed-in-the-band.***weak...i see what ur trying to do....but again relate to shit ppl kno

got Talons in spades, be afraid of what Sprayed-out-of-the-mouth,***
but then again friend, ya used ta bein layed-out-on-the-ground.*****mad weak

As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******nice flow

k I give this to SHADOW cause he was more consistent with his lines and personals, but ketch fell off at the end. ketch´s opener and closer were the only tight stuff. overall, i think both of you coulda done much better. peac.e.....


not tryin to insult anyones intelligence w/explanation...
just wanna make sure ya feelin me..1

* N.V. = Envy
** stephin king wrote a book called IT
*** he says he lives in lincoln park in his profile.
**** shadows name plays
*****I jus got Accepted to A.I. his Crew
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