Battle Rules:

16 Lines maximum
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No B/s
No feeding

check in now aka 30 minutes.., drop in 24 hours good luck........ aight Limited do your thing.... we're in the same crew so if u want crew votes to count- pm me and let me know..
~wun~

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 09-30-04 at 02:21 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 01:54 PM.

crew votes allowed (and agreed upon..)....................
aight let's do this Limited.............

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[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 01:59 PM.

audio heads cuppin' this coaster so he towin' our feat! (toe in our feet)
got verbals? we heard ya, Limited just "a-band-on" the beat!
like Bush for spelling Bs, post vote- ya screen's last resort!
say sorry mama, "baby grams" are just too much to abort!!
record's timed to die, bitch identified at lyrical morgues!
verse missd a score, your a vet but the worst on-board!
can't spit fire?! if you dress you screen in RV's red skin! (user cp)
structure's obese, as a middle weight you can barely win?!
you gettin' thin again, ya diet's gettin' ya verse in writin'!
Em's side-kick on-line, when you get ready your exercisin'!
love handlin' pound this cake stretch layers n miles u ate it! (8 mile)
barely made it, in crew rosters, his record postured D-graded!
like mute winnin' debates, pacin' words has no voice-effect!
old crew grew heads, your ill intent's a removed birth defect!


^if u don't get the word-play don't vote...... almost every line had some...... Limited Edition- was the leader of ill intentions, now in a.i. at the bottom of the audio roster, ppl complained that his voice in audio was too low-a band on the beat, abandon the beat, and he in fact is chubby..
*towin' our feat- takin' away the skill from our crew.. also, (toe n feet- relatin' to position on the roster..) cup- coaster..
y'all should get the rest..
~~~~~~~~~~~~good luck~~~~~~~~~~~ Limited,
~wun~

^ey, nice drop Limited Edition good luck with this fa sho............. uppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn''' '''''''''''''

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Haha yeah...yeah you too...I could have and should have came harder...haha whatevs...uppin'...

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let's get sum votes................ uppppppin this shit fa sho...........

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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

audio heads cuppin' this coaster so he towin' our feat! (toe in our feet)
got verbals? we heard ya, Limited just "a-band-on" the beat!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight dat was tight opener


like Bush for spelling Bs, post vote- ya screen's last resort!
say sorry mama, "baby grams" are just too much to abort!!
record's timed to die, bitch identified at lyrical morgues!
verse missd a score, your a vet but the worst on-board!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ HMPH nice punch good flow'z


can't spit fire?! if you dress you screen in RV's red skin! (user cp)
structure's obese, as a middle weight you can barely win?!
you gettin' thin again, ya diet's gettin' ya verse in writin'!
Em's side-kick on-line, when you get ready your exercisin'!
love handlin' pound this cake stretch layers n miles u ate it! (8 mile)
barely made it, in crew rosters, his record postured D-graded!
like mute winnin' debates, pacin' words has no voice-effect!
old crew grew heads, your ill intent's a removed birth defect!
^^^^^^^^^^ OOOOOOOOO DAT WAS ILL NICE PUNCHES AND FLOW DECENT PUNCHES AND META'Z

LADY- SHE HAD META'Z FIYA PUNCHES AND FLOW'Z


I'ma go easy in this...I am a gentleman honestly...
Wait a sec...is this bitch actually comin' on to me?
Sorry girl...I'm happy wit my Jenn...I'm actually spoken for...
"Happy birthday"...this evidence that you're a broken whore...
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER AND PERSONAL

If your that desperate...well here, this is your present...
Anotha loss on your record...I will be the one who sent it
Pain is inevitable...no matter what...suffering is optional...
You couldn't win this battle...If I dropped a verse that was topical
Well, this was fun...but I am sorry to say this battle is over...
I've put ya "Fiya" out...but for good measure...
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCHES NICE CLOSA


LIMIT EDITION- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW'Z AND PERSONALS


LADY GETS MY VOTE CUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND META'Z HER PUNCHES WERE ON POINT AND THROWIN FIYA


LIMIT KEEP AT IT MAYNE GOOD PUNCHES BUT WASNT HITTIN HARD ENOUGH,,,,,,,,AND REMEMBA WHEN U COME BATTLE A GIRL DONT TAKE IT LIGHTLY

EDITION0-WE COOL MAYNE NO BEEF HONEST VOTE HERE

V-LADY CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND META'Z

~PEACE~

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

votes here:

fiya had punches that landed on limited edition, LE's punches landed but not all of em were good for even hittin fiya

fiya: ya had some nice punches, the opener and closure were nice. slow ya vocab down, a lil vocab is nice...but too much makes the verse hard to read, and ya dont want ya flow thrown off, well nice drop...i was feeling the structure mainly, had some nice similies, need some more metaphors though, overall, grade A verse. nice drop ya won in my opinion.

limited edition: had some landed puches, ya started off weak and thats what i had the most crueshal judgement toward, ya need a hook, somthing that will open up ya verse, and keep us (voters) interested, but nuff preaching, ya had structure, ya ending was aight, ya opener cracked it, seems to me like ya rushed it, and didnt take ya time. plus the line about the droppin a topical in a text battle, i used that like 3-5 days ago. check the "wicked one" link in my sig.

drop an honest vote, wicked one = its in the sig.

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quote your own damn lyrics...

aight two votes, uppin' this shit fa sho. upppppppppppp ..........

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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

aight
i dont exactly like either of these people, but lady fiya merked him...
decent punches, dope metas, an the wordplay was right on point...
only flaw in the verse was the band on the beat line, i wasnt really feelin that, but the rest of us was a pretty well constructed verse, decent drop fiya...

limited, i dont know if u underestimated her, or didnt try cause ya in the same crew..
but she came alot harder on all fronts in this battle...
ya punches an personals didnt even connect at all in this battle, i'm dissapointwed with ya verse
i expected alot better

no hate an return the fave

p e a c e

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nice explanation, let's gets sum mo' votes people, uppin'.................

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