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Diabolic_aka_134 4 44.44%
streetryda 5 55.56%
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Old 09-15-04, 07:01 PM   #1
streetryda
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Diabolic_aka_134 vs streetryda

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Old 09-15-04, 07:01 PM   #2
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Old 09-15-04, 07:09 PM   #3
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Old 09-15-04, 07:32 PM   #4
streetryda
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you may be diabolic or 134 but bitch either way ill end up at ur front door/
moree beef to be spread ima take these gats and put you to the floor/
fuck with me now wait till im done i bring the pain so hard you'll be beggin me to stop/
dont keep siting there waiting for these bombs to drop/
you runnin on stock but i still run you on your block/
drop down im tucking glocks now one more pussy for me to beat/
and im not talkin bout under the bed sheets/
im talkin bout ur ass since you so diabolic/
watch out cuz you might see me be a killaholic/
i aint the type to be fuking round wit/
the only thing u beat is your stick to them porno flick/
bitch i you say fuck me why dont u fuck yourself/
bitch that way ull get more pussy/
push me and youll see that youll be the next one on my list/
i dont need these gats you gona be gone off one hit from the fists/
youll blown off one hit of the weed i fuk wit/
you still puttin shit on ur dick tryna get ur dog to suck it/
i feast on you beast on you im the one that shines/
im telling you dawg mess with me and ima end up commitin a crime/
put you in between the lines that are chalky white/
CSI crew gone be piking up pieces of you all night/
in spite of the fact your new i guess i gota stop being rude/
just remember i ryde these streets everyday dude/
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Old 09-15-04, 07:35 PM   #5
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dag man hurry up and post or its curtains but i know once and done they already closed
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Old 09-15-04, 07:36 PM   #6
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Aiight Imma Lil Rusty But Aiight Here Goes

Your Best To lean back n get of my case
b4 i shake ur ass n make u go religeous like ma$e/1
N dont b mad n descriminate my race
cuz this white boy b the 1st to put u back in ur place/2
This dude think he gangsta wif a name like street ryda
the only thing he rydin in the streets is the gangstas he meets... n we know wat he does wif tha meat (HAHA)/3
You Aint no gangsta, u aint handlin shit
the only thing u handlin is a muh fucin door nob/4
u dont wanna fuc wit me gangsta kuz i mite be a crip
kuz fukin wif me mite get ur wrists slit/5
n dont b mad if i win u dont hav to cus
its only a battle dude y u gotta fuss/6
ur gettin ya crew nigga u got allota guts
i know ur niggas got guns but do u bust/7
fuck wif me ill bust ur nuts..like a chicken egg
the only thing i fuk wif is ur bitch while im gettin head
u get in the way imma leave u dead/8
after all the blood an gore u c why i had to bust ur jaw
that ur shit was wack n mine was mad raw/9
Youve only posted 11
Dont waste my time son ill send u directly to heaven/10


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Old 09-15-04, 07:49 PM   #7
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This was feedback posted for Diabolic_aka_134

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aiiiiight

diabolics in my crew...

an i'ma give my honest opinnon on this boys verse...

some shit was humouress n the punches we're tiiight as hell..

but dia, a few flaws, (no hate just bein real n trynna help) but yea...the flaws were u stretched a couple of lines, an these people on the site try an stay away from the gun talk....but u used the gun lines kinda effectively, but try to stay away from that topic unless its in relation to a diss, ya know? like the persons name your battlin is a ''thug name'' but on the whole, nice drop...you'll see ya rhymes will get alot better as time goes on an the more practice u get the more elevation that will happen....but for ya first battle, the structure was top notch n the humouress punches will get you the win...
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Old 09-15-04, 07:56 PM   #8
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how u gonna steal my name son.....dats aight u aint kno......just checkin the polls tho...
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Old 09-15-04, 08:44 PM   #9
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Voted For: streetryda

Streetryda-Punches hit harder and your shit was more consistent that his. I liked that under the sheets punchline. You had it fromt he beginning

134-your punches really didn't hit at all. Elavate your shit. Alot of self glorifying. But you need to rethink your bars.

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Old 09-15-04, 10:29 PM   #10
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diabolic - your first line was hard. but it just fell apart after that. haha...good for 6 months

street ryda - you for real bustin gats? or are you just another g-unit member? haha. nice lines kid
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Old 09-15-04, 10:54 PM   #11
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uppin^^^!!!! all the time thanks man for the vote and all
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Old 09-16-04, 02:22 AM   #12
Mistic-Rogue
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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

shot man you got my vote bro your shit was tricky all throughout man! laterz and well done

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Old 09-16-04, 04:10 AM   #13
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Voted For: streetryda

streetryda has the better verse because of better flow, vocab, and stricture, his punches hit harder

both of yall need to improve your structure

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Old 09-18-04, 06:33 PM   #14
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^^uppin... thnx for the vote n feedback even though this shits against me.. thnx again
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Old 09-23-04, 10:12 AM   #15
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uppin this bitch for votesA
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