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Old 07-22-08, 12:19 AM   #1
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Old 07-22-08, 12:56 AM   #2
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tight concept,stayed on subject.good lyrics, only problem is you vocals are to loud,and your voice in monotone
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Old 07-23-08, 12:08 AM   #3
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good lookin on the feed back
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Old 07-23-08, 04:51 AM   #4
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real corny soundin, had to cut it off. u need a pop filter or put a sock on ya mic and get more emotion in ya sound
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Old 07-23-08, 01:17 PM   #5
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Need a pop killer, the volume for the vocals are to loud, but either than that this is a good track, nice lyrics, your flow was on point, nice choice of beat love this one, overall the only prob is the quality but who cares meh, good track homie
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