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ILL PUT MORE WOOD IN YA GIRLS MOUTH THAN A POPSICKLE/

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Very orginial...
Ya getter better tho..
Decent punches
Original flow.. but it was straight
Personals were kinda.. Blah.. but yea
Structure getttin better...
Next time keep that ! ~ ][{})( shit out of ya verse
It makes it look shit...
Overall......12/20





Eh.... ok i guess
rhyme scheme was weak
Flow was... Blah..
Punches was weak
Personals were'nt used..
Structure was decent...
But alot of played lines...
Overall.....6/20

V/Mysterioso...
Simple came harder

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IM UNSTOPPABLE
LIKE 50 IM UNPOPPABLE/
ILL PUT MORE WOOD IN YA GIRLS MOUTH THAN A POPSICKLE/

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Yo, this battle wasn't great, but wasn't bad.. um.. I think both of your verses were kinda the same in some ways. The rhymes were pretty simple, nothing really made me go "wow" or anything like that. Therefore, the punches didn't hit too hard. I think myst had better punches and they were more direct and personal on chao. That's what matters most. Creativity, was lacking.. both could do better. myst had some multis, some were alright, keep working on those. Come up with some shit that blows people away. A line that wins it... overall this battle goes to Myst

vote- myst

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