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5 | 55.56% |
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4 | 44.44% |
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03-29-05, 09:38 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: .Wicked One.
intensify effect~ok opener, it could have been worded better,i didnt like the jenna jameson line,it was like you were sayin wicked one was untouchable, thats the way it looks, but i see where you were trying to go here with that concept,some of your lines were stretched as well, but its ok,you're last 2 bars were the best punches you had, i didnt see any real personals here either,this overall was ok form you,i've seen better from you before, but overall not bad..1 wicked one~good opener,this set the tone of the battle nicelyyour vocabulary was overall creative here and structure was good, i liked the line"when its like aids laid down and had a child with herpes".lol, nice wordplay with howard stern name,and nice vince carter line, you had some decent personals, and your closer was good, not that strong,but ok, overall, i think you had the better verse here,it was well put together and the vocab was prominent, good job..1
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03-30-05, 12:32 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: intensify effect
Wicked One: Fast dissensions made after the honest criticism was laid... Hitting me back is like hitting a bitch with aids... ^^no 2/10 Your crew goes out to fight while you run and hide... Mite as well commit suicide heres a written homicide... ^^no 2/10 I'm ill, there's no doubts, so how can u expect to hurt me?... When it's like aids laid down and had a child with herpes... ^^lol good 6/10 Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... ^^good meta 6/10 And I ain't wasting anymore lines, or anymore time... On a kid, thats been playing with it so long, he was born blind... ^^lol good 5/10 I'm kinda like Vince Carter cause I'm half man half amazin... Please kid u got 32 Losses, got me thinkin that u rap as bad as an raisan... ^^wtf 2/10 I'm contagious like a case of Sars... I'll start clappin your ass and have you seein stars... ^^no 1/10 Just like Def Jam Vendetta my game is blazin... Yet you still have no idea who you facin... ^^no 2/10 overall: 26/80 (33%) Intensify Effect: this match'll make wickedone resemble a newpart enflamed.... cuz im'a beat hes ass worse then noticing ya B's are Ds like report card u changed.... ^^stretched as fuck and forced and wack 1/10 N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... ^^no 2/10 and to confess, i can see u'r stress and ya style im blaming-son... This kid Untouchable? Yea right, and so is Jenna Jameason... ^^dope shit 8/10 ya spit like a pistol jam'in-son, u'll lose even if u mastered this course... cuz u couldnt burn a track... if u set flames to a race-course... ^^no 3/10 so why do this?, like a cripple with a cane u make no sense stupid.... tryin to prefect ya flow in text?, why don't u try reverse'in time?so never heard of music.. ^^decent but stretched again 4/10 u talk about a W's but flow lacks a WIN-FACT, so i'll rip-facts IN brawl's... so quit rap, cuz my punches push'in u back like straps on bras..... ^^decent but played concept 4/10 pause..... befor u re-laps in ya tracks... and make ya weak heart collaps.... cuz its like u AIM but shot-shit, and 2 dices aint have no parts in ya CRAP... BITCH!!! ^^ehh OK 5/10 Overall: 27/70 (39%) You both came extremely wack..But I.E actually had 1 good punch while Wicked had only a decent one Vote: Intensify Effect Return the favor on a battle in my sig please
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08-21-05, 11:01 PM
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Banned: Biting
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
IP: D6C6 1C0A
upp'in this old ass battle.................................
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08-22-05, 03:30 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C295 AD2A
upp'in this battle.......................................
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08-24-05, 06:10 AM
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IP: BAC1 8D68
Voted For: .Wicked One.
wow...........old shit here Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-25-05, 02:27 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C295 AD2A
Wicked One:
Fast dissensions made after the honest criticism was laid... Hitting me back is like hitting a bitch with aids... ^^no 2/10 Your crew goes out to fight while you run and hide... Mite as well commit suicide heres a written homicide... ^^no 2/10 I'm ill, there's no doubts, so how can u expect to hurt me?... When it's like aids laid down and had a child with herpes... ^^lol good 6/10 Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... ^^good meta 6/10 And I ain't wasting anymore lines, or anymore time... On a kid, thats been playing with it so long, he was born blind... ^^lol good 5/10 I'm kinda like Vince Carter cause I'm half man half amazin... Please kid u got 32 Losses, got me thinkin that u rap as bad as an raisan... ^^wtf 2/10 I'm contagious like a case of Sars... I'll start clappin your ass and have you seein stars... ^^no 1/10 Just like Def Jam Vendetta my game is blazin... Yet you still have no idea who you facin... ^^no 2/10 overall: 26/80 (33%) Intensify Effect: this match'll make wickedone resemble a newpart enflamed.... cuz im'a beat hes ass worse then noticing ya B's are Ds like report card u changed.... ^^stretched as fuck and forced and wack 1/10 N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... ^^no 2/10 and to confess, i can see u'r stress and ya style im blaming-son... This kid Untouchable? Yea right, and so is Jenna Jameason... ^^dope shit 8/10 ya spit like a pistol jam'in-son, u'll lose even if u mastered this course... cuz u couldnt burn a track... if u set flames to a race-course... ^^no 3/10 so why do this?, like a cripple with a cane u make no sense stupid.... tryin to prefect ya flow in text?, why don't u try reverse'in time?so never heard of music.. ^^decent but stretched again 4/10 u talk about a W's but flow lacks a WIN-FACT, so i'll rip-facts IN brawl's... so quit rap, cuz my punches push'in u back like straps on bras..... ^^decent but played concept 4/10 pause..... befor u re-laps in ya tracks... and make ya weak heart collaps.... cuz its like u AIM but shot-shit, and 2 dices aint have no parts in ya CRAP... BITCH!!! ^^ehh OK 5/10 Overall: 27/70 (39%) You both came extremely wack..But I.E actually had 1 good punch while Wicked had only a decent one Vote: Intensify Effect Return the favor on a battle in my sig please |
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09-24-05, 07:21 PM
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IP: FF08 63B8
Voted For: intensify effect
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10-05-05, 08:19 AM
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Above Originality
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
IP: D40E 67D5
Pppppppppppoooooooooolllllllllllzzzzzz............ .........
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10-10-05, 01:33 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
we need a last vote for this shit to end come on ya dont sleep just one more vote.................
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10-10-05, 01:35 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
this probley the oldest battle that has ever been upp'in...............
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10-10-05, 01:54 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
yea yea yea.........................................
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11-22-05, 02:00 PM
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Banned: Biting
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
IP: 21D9 C3FE
upp'in to end this already.............................
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11-22-05, 02:45 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
yea yea yea.........................................
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11-24-05, 01:07 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 34E4 9FE7
Voted For: intensify effect
ie took this cuz he actually had a cxouple punches n not mostly self glorification throughout his verse... this was a very weak battle, no need to break bars down... no hate pc
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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