10 lines min and max..

Blind spit.30 mins after me..

No D/R votes
No hate votes
All votes explained..

3-0 Ko or 1st to 5

Peace

Its Like..

Manz you aint changing at all, having wack products cause your an amateur,
Your Making more Look alike wack bars than cheap wal-mart superstores/
Idolise these words boy as this type is heavy unlike your thin lined creations,
You think your heard? Nah, people just stay by you cause your identification/
This crowd wants more, not your lame wackness typing out at standards of poor,
Did you know, your just a bore, why? Cause your kiddie spits make us snore/
Lockz you just dock some low crap which don’t drop any devastating hits,
You think you can lock this show? Hah your rusty spits dont secure winning scripts/
Fuck this fool, bitch your just a tool being used when thinking that your cool,
Man, a kindergartens rhymes are more complex the shit you will bring in our duel/

Yeh yeh..come..

Peace...

U aint got a chance of makin it like a dude wit Aids cuz you got a [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)
Takin you out dis battle wit EASE I feel like im battling myself and u just some broad on dey knees/

Im Elusively Exclusive LocKz flares tha beat & Makes all Oppostion scared ta speak/
Lyrically You Proved-ya-weak Yea I said this was for a good-battle but I USED-you 4 a simple Defeat/

ur Lyrics Have Me Intrigue With Laughter, The Weather Bureau Should Label Your Verse A Natural Disaster/
This battle has Lockz on Top It’s another Happily-Ever-AFTER get on your knees and pray to your Master/
Dozing off this BASTARD so many punches comin from both fist you don’t who which one is hittin u FASTER/

Beating me aint happening like Beating A Limp Dick~This dudes a FuckiN PrICk~I advance to 1-0 QuICk/
You Got punches in your verse but they don’t Stick~ Trying to decide if me wants to be masculint or femine but he wont PICK/


Giving this nigga the Salute will be my next feat* Goodbye dawg ill always remember this az my most effortless of beats/


i kinda got confused..i thought the deadline was midnight tonight..i jus peeped this...Verse is choppy

Uppin this peeps..if you look dont just go, drop a link ill return the favour!

Peace

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Vote-Doze

Reason-Better punches.....flow...structure....Lockz...your structure was fucked up...Your lines were to long which killed your flow...and your punches were so damn basic....Doze merked you on every category....

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#3

agree toataly dozey took it for me same reasons...

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#4

Locks, you have to change up your style a bit.... I don't konw if you're used to battling verbally but it just doesn't look right when its text.

Then again, " [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)" doesn't make sense regardless of how you present it.

If I could vote I'd go w/ Doze on ths one.



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069

Last one...

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#5

Doze got this in all categories , eeeeeeeeeeeenuff said.

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aint got a chance of makin it like a dude wit Aids cuz you got a [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)
Takin you out dis battle wit EASE I feel like im battling myself and u just some broad on dey knees/

nice opener, structure was kinda off but the rest was hot yo

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