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Old 10-18-04, 09:46 PM   #1
Chew187
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CHEW spittin once again

IP: 5043 32F4

Everybody wants to see what I deliver
While they stand outside buck naked in a blizzard
What can you say seperates you from this weakest
I can't even get a job everytime I try I fail the pee test
I get alot of tail cuz females know i am thee best
When you drop your gun they complain cuz they cant even see it
Once again emcee's try to deprive me of my pride
But the vibe lives on and continually coincides along side my stride
coincidentally the same shit is chewing me up inside
beats thumping, live humping bottle o wine
off the top, str8 up, i'm one of a kind
and if you can't see that you must be blind
I got sprays that'll git you like demons
thousands of them spreading out like semen
BEtta stop frontin cuz you aint nothing til someone kills you
fills up your cup takes your back & then spills your guts
Here at the 4 plex we dont give a *uck!!
Sport your hood homies & hold your click up
We won't hesitate to have your whole crew hiccup

My poetry is deep like a promise hard to keep
I promise you this- i'll spit blood on your face with my kicks
While you you fade out & reminisce on acts you used to committ
I'm not the type to hold a grudge or take a role
but if I had the same mindstate as you
I'd rather have nothing at all
to me this makes much more sense
than that mofo studdering *uckface 50 cents
Thats right 50 i'm the full dollar
You wanna fight tonight? i'll hang you up by your collar
this wasnt sposed to be a hate rap when when i started
but then i got high & shit just got retarded


I know I can do better than this one but i'm proud of it! I would give it a B sharp!! **** 3-4 stars ; give me your input
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Old 10-18-04, 10:51 PM   #2
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didnt even read it
take your rhyme's to open mic.
then they will get all the reply's you need.
pz
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