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Old 07-26-08, 01:07 AM   #1
Jay Rose
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just a lil somethin

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wow its been a while since i dropped a track in here....so uhh yea some shit i just did tonight with this dude from another site....word tryin to bring the song forum back with everyone else....tell me what you think of it...


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Old 07-26-08, 02:15 PM   #2
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listenin...

1st cat-good vibe, emotion, etc...likin the lyrics too, good shit...chorus comes in nicely

2nd-sounds kinda like first guy lol but i dont like the flow as much...decent lyrics but first over did this, good emotion tho kinda hard to hear sometimes when the back ground singin cuts in...not bad tho

like it tho good shit
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Old 07-26-08, 05:04 PM   #3
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haha cool i like the feed seeing how im the first guy, ha....thanks bro
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 07-28-08, 02:04 PM   #4
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This is pretty sick.

Who made the beat for this? Sounds like a Sinema beat.

Who's singing?

Both verses were pretty good flow wise and everything...pretty good track actually. Lyrics are fitting.

Holy FUCK at the guitar and shit.

That part is absolutely dope.

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Sick stuff.

Keep it up.
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Old 07-28-08, 04:31 PM   #5
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yeah this is good. i think u should talk a little bit over the hook though so it sounds more like u had something to do with it cuz the beat and singer is fly, but for sure talk some shit along wit the hooks
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Old 07-29-08, 01:36 AM   #6
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thanks guys....n yea some more coulda been done with the hook to personalize it, but its not my track im just a verse on his track so anytihng like that ill let him tackle that beast
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 08-25-08, 12:36 PM   #7
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my ego is making me up this one again
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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