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no feedin
no hate votes, explained votes only
crew votes OK

good luck

Yo check it,

You B.I.Detained… well I.B.Deranged cuz I'ma Killer
U Bitin my Rhymes cuz it's Great Taste & Less Filler
Executive? They told him he got a Office with Windows…
It was… a cubicle & a PC with Microsoft XP (DOH!)
Herb needs to Grow, got you Wet to Help Water Ya
U have to be Male to get Sonned, so I guess I Daughtered Ya!
Plus ya Style's got less Flavor than a Bottle of Water Does
Spill ya Intestines… to Battle me Takes a Lotta Guts
I'm glad One of us is "Content With The Shitty Thangs" (see sig)
Cuz I like Lot's of Money, Fine Honeys and Many Thangs LOL

spit when you get a chance

sup blood..finished my battles n my c'work lol
lets get moving ....good luck either way pz

lol to your Avater..loser thinks left over Seaman is Dr'ing $pit..
..but your Fans still couldnt Surpass your future 5-0 Defecit
see $pit' was in Black Tie...but got rejected from the Execs..
..its the same fuckin crew..and this tryout verse's a Wreck
how du expect to be Recruited..with a 10 loss, Mocked Margin?
..Controlled the battle so much..Spit keeps callin me Sergeant
I've seen more Anept Punches from Steven Hawkins Computer...
..I jus stole the last of your Pride away..call me an Iraqui Looter
Fuckin Loser..asks me for a Battle..Fails Miserably to take my Rec'
..he thought by being the Ends Secretary..that wud gain Respect

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opener - retained
closer - retained...spit that was probably the worst one ive seen to date
punches - spit...this was best bar Herb needs to Grow, got you Wet to Help Water Ya
U have to be Male to get Sonned, so I guess I Daughtered Ya!

retained this was your best bars see $pit' was in Black Tie...but got rejected from the Execs..
..its the same fuckin crew..and this tryout verse's a Wreck
how du expect to be Recruited..with a 10 loss, Mocked Margin?
..Controlled the battle so much..Spit keeps callin me Sergeant

all in all retained had way more original punches that were personals so harder hitting
personals - retained...explained it above
wordplay - both were equal in this
vocab - spit
originality - retained
overal - retained...good spit from both of you but retained won with punch personals

thanx___Spits windows line was hot..i was laughing my tits off__________1st up________________________________________________ _____________________

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Spit

You B.I.Detained… well I.B.Deranged cuz I'ma Killer
U Bitin my Rhymes cuz it's Great Taste & Less Filler

Descent punch, good play on his name, straight flow

Executive? They told him he got a Office with Windows…
It was… a cubicle & a PC with Microsoft XP (DOH!)

Nice multi and straight flow, hard punch

Herb needs to Grow, got you Wet to Help Water Ya
U have to be Male to get Sonned, so I guess I Daughtered Ya!

Straight punch weak & played tho, descent flow

Plus ya Style's got less Flavor than a Bottle of Water Does
Spill ya Intestines… to Battle me Takes a Lotta Guts

Good meta's straight punch, good flow

I'm glad One of us is "Content With The Shitty Thangs" (see sig)
Cuz I like Lot's of Money, Fine Honeys and Many Thangs LOL

First line was a descent personal, second was wack.

BID

lol to your Avater..loser thinks left over Seaman is Dr'ing $pit..
..but your Fans still couldnt Surpass your future 5-0 Defecit

Lol nice personals, nice punch, nice flow

see $pit' was in Black Tie...but got rejected from the Execs..
..its the same fuckin crew..and this tryout verse's a Wreck

Nice personal again, straight punch, nice flow

how du expect to be Recruited..with a 10 loss, Mocked Margin?
..Controlled the battle so much..Spit keeps callin me Sergeant

LMAO Sick personal punch, nice flow, hot wordplay

I've seen more Anept Punches from Steven Hawkins Computer...
..I jus stole the last of your Pride away..call me an Iraqui Looter

LOL Sick meta's hard punch

Fuckin Loser..asks me for a Battle..Fails Miserably to take my Rec'
..he thought by being the Ends Secretary..that wud gain Respect

Nice, not sure if thats a personal or not, good flow, descent punch.

Straight battle, seen better from both but BID got this.
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thanks for voting, B.I. nice job mayne you killin me here


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Well, honestly...

Both of these verses are way below par from ya norm...

Spit seemed to mostly talk about himself. (opener/closer)

And throw weak shit like the "computer" talk. Why?

Your single best line was the "daughtered" one.

That's it, man...sorry.

B.I. hit pretty soft and played ("Hawkins" is played, anything "Iraqi" is too)...

But he had some tight personals in there that helped him wreck this battle.

Wordplay and flow and shit were about even.

This came down to personals and punches...for B.I.

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yo bi detained got this. good battle by both. hit these up with a honest vote.

Vote Don't Count.
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wtf???^^^go away herb..only explained, honest votes count!!
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good battle here............was feelin both verses........cept b.i.
pulls this one out........

breakdown
opener - ib
closer - ib
vocab/complexity - tie
dissing/personals - tie
punches - tie
flow - ib
overall - ib........just a better verse.......

cant poll..........not registered yet.........

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opener:BI
closer:Tie
punches:BI
structure: Tie
vocab: Tie
wordplay: Bi
overall: BI

spit, i seen you come a lot harder than this, BI had the peronsla, plz vote on the first battle in my sig

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