Breakdown

Default - Default came nice. Hook aint all that and definetly could have been better but it was decent. 1st verse picked up about half way through. 2nd verse was decent too but I wasn't feeling it too much really. Nice flow to it and a good creative concept though. 6.5/10

Willa - Concept was tight on this track too. I can it was rushed but still a good job. not sure if you droped 16 or you just wanted to do something special and put a delayed hook in there but I was feeling your hook and verse a lil more then jays. your flow was a bit better even though. She had a lot more personal shit and you can relate more to it. 7.5/10

V/ Willa

Good job both of you for dropping...next week you can pick your own beats so you wont have to go through this shit. pc

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Alright. Dunno if I can vote.....But ima do it ne ways. Both had nice quality, nice content, beat sux but hell....what are u gonna do. I would go basicly on delivery,and flow here. Default gets this mainly because Willa's bar's were almost all recorded one at a time.....and there's no problem with that, but u can notice it and it kinda fux up your flow. Just on an overall basis I go with Default, but I wasn't feelin the effects at the start of your shit. Woulda jus been better witta constant Doub in my opinion.

Vote - Default. Latta

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

aiight this is my vote

aiight. i like this beat. the flow is nice on this joint, im feelin it, the quality is decent. Lyrics is pretty good and good concept. the voice is pretty good. Im likin the mic pressence. Good intro in the middle LOL @ u makin the gun noises HAHA. 2nd verse meh the flow wasnt as good. damn im likin the ending the concept is fire. cool tracc yo. i like this

7.6/10

Willa:

damn nice Flow im likin the flow better then Jay's...the mic pressence is good. the quality is worse then default. umm. Did you just stop rapping all of a sudden? LOL. meh. you would of had this if you would of continued rapping. but the chorus was blah and you just stopped. but the flow and multi's were there in the first verse. i liked this

7.2/10

vote: default.

Honest vote, im cool with both. so this is what i honestly fel

Holla

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iight

Jay/Default - I ono the flows sounds forced a bit at first but you settled in lyrics pretty basic.. not feeling this hook... concept of the song is cool especially the end... but the talkin kinda ruins it for me...

Willa - Lyrics are a little loud but clear and can hear your punch ins plain as day lol... not a bad thing just something i can notice.. Just really not feeling this.

Overall i think Default made a better track so

Vote - Default

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"Only god can judge me, but I'm atheist so you do the math..."

props j............

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...69&postcount=20

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Default
i liked the way u played with the sounds in the background
lol..yo man u want me 2 tell u where 2 find some gun samples
ya lyrics were kinda basic..but u moved em around the track right
all ya tracks kinda sound the same tho..gotta change that
but u had a nice track here yo..

Willa
ya voice was over rideing the beat..u should turn ya vocals down a couple db'z
ya lyrix were kinda like blah..u can tell u didnt really have time 2 work with this
but u came pretty nice for someone with no time..work on pronouncin ya words
better..i have that problem from time 2 time 2..but this battle was kinda 1 sided

v/Default

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