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Old 05-17-09, 09:46 PM   #1
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Black On Black Crime #1

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BLACK ON BLACK CRIME #1

Concerned over the skies I turn my eyes to look at pictures
Shook by scriptures in the damn hood, ramb stood in mixtures
Of colors, new phase my brothers, I and the ramb gazed at
Each other like cat and dog and then this fat fog was spat
From the mouth of a cloud realized I’m from the south and proud
Lamb said “stay and remain two can play this game then a crowd
Of people gathered around, now a Christ knife falls in my hand from
The sky, felt like the Highlander knife was a lightning blade I was
Frightened and afraid grabbed my horse looked at the saddle cuz
Shooked ready for battle, the ramb represented black on black crime
And now it was attack time its horn long he was born strong and divine
Its eyes was red fire it was sweaty and ready to endure a pure battle
It had a stare of death and hate now it looks at my breast plate I’m rattled
And pissed why do this exist? I asked myself this task is deft I have to kill
The ramb to defeat the times of street crimes, tension really started to build
Now my horse sprout wings no doubt my bling is tucked in couldn’t duck
The winds of battle now straddle the saddle and my horse take off this
Will be a great cost if my fate is lost my vocab pure but I mus abjure my brisk
Street ways or this could be a complete grave for me this is family Matters
Like Urkel my horse scater his wings and circles the ramb as the dust scatters
The beast awaits no peace just hates, must end this violence now the wind
Silence
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Old 05-17-09, 09:50 PM   #2
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on the postive, once we get the new URL this guy wont be able to drop any more
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Old 05-17-09, 10:52 PM   #3
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word, and if I see him appear on the new shit dropping this shit in the wrong place time and time again, i'm going to ban his sorry ass.
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Old 05-18-09, 08:55 PM   #4
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all the hate but i guess not educated enough to read the message shame on haters and freaks
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Old 05-18-09, 09:00 PM   #5
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The message is you're an idiot for posting this shit in the wrong area time and time again. So post in the right area, or get banned. Simple.
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Old 05-18-09, 10:25 PM   #6
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On another note this shit was still hot and deep and digging it...

Be seriously if you smart enough to drop this deep track with a message then why can't you understand to drop this shit in the open mic and leave feed on 2 other open mic so yours stay open isn't that simple enough how can we get this deep message if you can't understand rapverse simple one.....

Its hot so don't get it deleted cuz you wanna be ignorent do it the right way and earn ya respect am pretty sure you would get you dope with open mic so drop it there not here would hate to see talented scripture go to waste because you didn't feel like you had to follow a simple rule which would get you bannd permanitly....

Come join the B.E.S.T crew we got a spot you can drop all of your shit and we will post it in the right spot for you word.....
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Old 05-21-09, 07:56 PM   #7
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^ always the recruit, eh?
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Old 05-21-09, 08:21 PM   #8
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Yes and you gotta admitt he has skills and he's good just like to piss people off by posting on the wrong fourm but dude is actually talented with he's stuff....


You honest think this drop is wack??

I don't..
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Old 05-21-09, 08:50 PM   #9
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It's ok, nothing special.

But on a consistent basis he has dropped garbage, this is the first shit that's actually shown some potential.
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