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reddot06 5 100.00%
fine mind 0 0%
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Old 05-25-04, 04:36 PM   #1
lyrical distruction
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reddot06 vs fine mind

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no crew votes
no hate votes


Expired battle win
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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//
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Old 05-25-04, 04:52 PM   #2
reddot06
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what kind of name is fine mind
battle me what bitch are you blind
cause i spit so hard i will have your blood gushing
after im done spitting its ur face i will be crushing
you didnt stand a chance with the great DOT
i will fuck your motha and let her corps rot
this shit is mine you aint got no chance
after you hear this you will shit ur pants
cause you know your done
so run bitch run!

this wasnt my best ever but it will get the job done
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Old 05-25-04, 04:59 PM   #3
reddot06
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c'mon spit i dont want to wait all day i want to get some votes too so hurry
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Old 05-26-04, 02:25 PM   #4
lyrical distruction
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by da way, just changed my name, reddot your an open target, shot you dead wid a sniper rifle//
your words are lackling, like dey need to be exercised slim fasting, I'll put you down in spectacular fashion//
Your a ass-likin bitch, and give you dad blow outs in-differen't-tricks//
i got a melting reaction, destroying you wid my new name lyrical distuction//
on top of the game, cutting out da lameass make sure your left dat way to stay//
your my top priority to get killed, pop you in da bottom of my oven grilled//
so stop wid ya corny rhymes, leave dem underneath your wardrobe draw//
get fucked, in anyway, beat up or hanged, wateva I hate dis bitch//
leave your lungs in a a contaminated location, wid ya head stuck on someones furnature//
Leave me alone, plus dis battle an't yours, it's been returned to the rightful player//
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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//
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Old 05-26-04, 04:32 PM   #5
reddot06
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hey lets get some votes on this... please!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-27-04, 03:45 PM   #6
lyrical distruction
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uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//
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Old 05-27-04, 05:11 PM   #7
50hater_killer
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god dam red dot does it again red dot has a kick ass open and sry but I have to give my vote to red dot.

and hey can someone check out my battle to
http://community.rapbattles.com/poll.php
 
Old 05-27-04, 05:19 PM   #8
50hater_killer
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OK the reason why red dot gets my vote is becuase he has a good opening a good flow. and the ending was perfect so over all he gets my vote.
 
Old 05-27-04, 05:40 PM   #9
For$akeN
Umm...Yeah
 
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yo fine mind you needa get your drop to rhyme more fo real & get your
structure better cuz it's way too stretched the flow was not as good as
it could of been.......... reddot06 you won this you had better punches
better flow, better structure so you took this

drop a honest vote on my most recent battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126887
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Old 05-30-04, 04:33 PM   #10
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
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red
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 7/10

find
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

v/ red

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