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ilLogics 2 100.00%
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Old 01-30-04, 06:44 PM   #1
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DNUFO2 Vs. ilLogics

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Ok, I'll go first. The usual 10 line battle.
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Old 01-30-04, 06:49 PM   #2
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ight dog, get ur stuff in soon and i post soon as possible. HOLLA. IlLoGics
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Old 01-30-04, 06:58 PM   #3
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Where do i begin? This is just another battle that "I'm Meant to win."
The voters say i need to elevate my game/ I gotta throw better punches and make u look lame/ I'm gonna smack your face up/ while your girl is out getting her dick sucked.
You know she's more of a man than you/ u probably take off your pants so she can spank you with a shoe.
Your logic isn't even ill/ no, flow, no rhymes, u don't even have skill.
I hope you see things my way, your girls at my house, she's in my bed, I hope that's ok. She told me to tell u she said hi. I chopped off her dick,
so now, she isn't a guy.
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Old 01-30-04, 07:40 PM   #4
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i get my post in as soon as possible, probs within the next day
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Old 01-30-04, 07:45 PM   #5
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ok...drop it any time.............................
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Old 01-31-04, 03:32 PM   #6
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waiting for u to drop man.........................
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Old 02-02-04, 10:42 PM   #7
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c'mom man its been 3 days.........................
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Old 02-05-04, 07:03 PM   #8
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been busy, my bad about keeping you waiting heres my battle verse

With a pen in my hand im most dangerous, I write these murderous rymes
With the intent to leave minds crushed, life taken away, ur clocks runn out of time
I left you waiting for my verse, letting the tension build then I explode
With a fist full of hard hitting punches, crushin craniums, brains implode
Fought I no showed, but really I was letting ur confidence build,
Ur wackness rymes, and used puchness could never kill me, im to skilled
And they way I slice opponents in two leavin blood spilled, its sure I killed
this bitch and its hoes, sent them back to home, torn and tattered
mind shattered,im to advanced, ur wack, keep away from rap, stick to rock
and stick to sucking ur dads cock and don’t test me cause this pens my glock


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Old 02-05-04, 07:13 PM   #9
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Kind Of A Onesided Battle IiLogics Took This Easily Hands Down Even Tho I Felt Like Both Coulda Came Better Illogic Took It With The Punches,Personals/Disses,Wordplay,Vocab,Wordplay,Structure,Etc Plus He Was More On Point & Direct........

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Old 02-05-04, 07:29 PM   #10
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V/ Ill

Both werent that great... DNU, your verse was just plain and basic...the punches u threw were weak and not hard hitting..they had played concepts and werent complex at all..your structure wasnt good either, with the flow being choppy and you writting it like a paragraph..do what ILL did and drop it like him. Ill, ya verse was much better then DNU, it still wasnt great though...ya structure was much better then DNU's..the way u formated it was good, but ya line length wasnt..ya lines are to long and they are whats called "stretched bars" cut them down alot, they are way to long.. your punches were just ok, more complex then DNU....but his did have no complexity at all. yours were still basic but they hit alittle harder then DNU's....and they werent as gay. both of u need to elevate extremely.....take a trip to wackness emergancy center and keep battling...read some Elevated Front Lines battles to see what ya shit could look like...once u get to that level check out the LLL battles...
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Old 02-06-04, 11:37 AM   #11
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Props to everyone who took time to vote, i do the same for your battles soon,


uppin this for more votes, drop a link and i vote on your battle
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Old 02-14-04, 11:17 AM   #12
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so...people u still have to vote..................
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