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08-11-05, 07:48 AM
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This was feedback posted for Stanza
IP: 742C 7013
checkin the polls on this battle............................
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08-11-05, 12:06 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 9D5A BF38
herbs voting............................................
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08-11-05, 04:12 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 9D5A BF38
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08-11-05, 05:28 PM
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IP: BD79 807E
Voted For: Stanza
stanza's verse was short and to the point... it was clear disses and you knew exactly what he was talkin about... on the other hand, natural killa's lines were WAAAAAY to complex... dont get me wrong, i understood every line but all of nats lines were stretched and the wordplay was really forced... like his opener about as-nats... it really brought down ur verse... sorry nat, i wasnt really feeling any of your lines except for the line about the leader being the worst in the crew, i thought it was amusing although lines like that are played to fuck.... nothing really stood out in stanza's verse, it just wasnt completely wack. none of his punches or lines connected at all because he also had a cuppla played concepts (crack in pocket) and forced word play ( WTF at the exed L line...). the only reason Stanza gets this vote is because his punches werent so complicated... he was short and to the point, making it a better text read V/ Stanza |
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08-11-05, 07:44 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 53C6 22B9
uppin.................1-0 in stanza's favor.......
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08-11-05, 08:09 PM
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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
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y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-11-05, 11:23 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 53C6 22B9
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08-11-05, 11:46 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Stanza
Structure-Stanza, had a better flowing verse due to good structure, natural killa....ur verse was very poorly structured, try to make each line end at the same point... Vocab-Natural killa, the little vocab that i saw came from natural killa...it was better than stanza's, stanza up on ur vocab...even though ur puncehs handled it..... Personals-Both had pretty decent personals....but Stanza's were more effective and appealing than killa's..but both could up on those..... Punches-Stanza, very good punches, made me laugh wit that pokemon shit...very good punch ma man, natural u had ok punches nothing very promising....nor hard hitting no hate though good job....... Multis-Natural killa, had better multis by far, i can say this becuz he is the only one who had multis in this battle....stanza work on gettiing some multis into ur verses fo real.... Originality-Stanza was more original and fresh than natural....natural was kinda all over the place while stanze was staying on point and just straight dissing natural....and killa...u shouldnt have to explain ur personals  V/STANZA RTF SINCE I KINDLY PEEPED THIS AND ANALYZED IT OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED |
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