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check.....14 lines...

12 is cool check

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

Dude names himself after Vincent, for art he ditches his cause
he illustrates dogs...jus so he can say he's ever had a bitch in his draws
pitiful...and if ya wackness dont leave u down, i'll leave u truly saddened
i'ma bury ya face in the gutter bitch, jus to curb your enthusiasm
i notice that u aint smart at all, when i come thru and strike skulls
it's funny how jokes go over ya head, but never the light bulb
i try and merk this hoe quick, but he runs till his lungs are aching
that's why takin Vango dead serious....is such a huge undertaking
i should even try on this dude...no need for ferocious lines or a tight form
cuz he blows,
...........and by doin that, he thinks he can take the world by storm
Vango ya scriptures are weak, too easy for my verse ta' shake, clown
and wit lines so fragile.....u leave voters wit nervous break downs

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A.I.

Line 7 should read- Is it Kwell or Kwali, I seen your battles so I know it aint Mos Def

Good luck.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

just so everyone knows, i changed my title from "Proper Kwalifications" yesterday...before anyone thinks otherwise...

vote from the mod man......

Kwell....aight verse...you should have put in some harder punches yours were
like blah...hit but slide off vango, your struc was ok personals were the same
as your punches, could of been better, overall you should of came harder
cuz your closer was weak-Revoke

Vango.....pretty nice verse, like some of those punches and they made me
laugh like the mime line and him having his head stuck in his ass, pretty nice
ish def hit harder than K's verse thats why you got this

V/Vango

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Kwell:
Dude names himself after Vincent, for art he ditches his cause
he illustrates dogs...jus so he can say he's ever had a bitch in his draws
^^^lmao, nice opener
pitiful...and if ya wackness dont leave u down, i'll leave u truly saddened
i'ma bury ya face in the gutter bitch, jus to curb your enthusiasm
^^^didn't jump out at me...decent punch
i notice that u aint smart at all, when i come thru and strike skulls
it's funny how jokes go over ya head, but never the light bulb
^^^aight punch
i try and merk this hoe quick, but he runs till his lungs are aching
that's why takin Vango dead serious....is such a huge undertaking
^^^played
i should even try on this dude...no need for ferocious lines or a tight form
cuz he blows,
...........and by doin that, he thinks he can take the world by storm
^^^lines too stretched, decent
Vango ya scriptures are weak, too easy for my verse ta' shake, clown
and wit lines so fragile.....u leave voters wit nervous break downs
^^^first line too stretched, aight closer

overall a aight verse, you got potential kid 7/10

I'll start with your Proper Kwallifications, kid you don't even own a rap degree
I got freestyle raps that'll make your lungs collapse like you were O.D.B
^^^little stretched for a opener...self glorifying
I peeped some of your battles Kwell, half your shit don't even rhyme
Your sig says "Dopeness speaks for itself", I guess that your a mime
^^^ha, nice
Your like Roy Jones in a heavyweight match, underweight and outclassed
How can you be in "Mind above Body", when your heads stuck in your ass
^^^lmao, nice punch on the crew
Is it Kwell or Kwali, I've since your battles so I know it aint Mos Def
This kid wouldn't be dope even if I changed your name to Crystal Meth
^^^aight punch here, good nameplay on first line
All your punches are catchin air Kwell while Vango is checking chins
You could create 7 aliases, vote for yourself, and still not even win
^^^good punch here
Changed the name of this league so much that it's got confusing
Oh now I get why they changed the name, it's cuz Kwell Loves Losing
^^^best bar of the match

overall a nice verse 8/10

this was a close battle, Vango edged kwell in this by a bit in this, with nice personals, and that closer was ill...both verses flows fine, both verses structures are decent, vango took this for harder hitting punches, and better vocab

voted for: Vango

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Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1742740
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=160482&page=2
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160483
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160477

Vote: Kwell

Wittier... I liked lighhtbulb line

How could u use ODB lines, Vango...

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

I liked both......I thought each came out pretty strong in this one and each had a line that actually made me chuckle a bit, but Vango seemed to have a couple played lines in his verse that brought it down a bit. If he could have stayed a little more consistant he might have pulled it out......but that head out of your ass line had me dying

Vote - Kwell

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Dude names himself after Vincent, for art he ditches his cause
he illustrates dogs...jus so he can say he's ever had a bitch in his draws
lol! liked it
pitiful...and if ya wackness dont leave u down, i'll leave u truly saddened
i'ma bury ya face in the gutter bitch, jus to curb your enthusiasm
old concept.. fresh angle on it
i notice that u aint smart at all, when i come thru and strike skulls
it's funny how jokes go over ya head, but never the light bulb
quality
i try and merk this hoe quick, but he runs till his lungs are aching
that's why takin Vango dead serious....is such a huge undertaking
still good
i should even try on this dude...no need for ferocious lines or a tight form
cuz he blows,
...........and by doin that, he thinks he can take the world by storm
meh.. average sorta wordplay
Vango ya scriptures are weak, too easy for my verse ta' shake, clown
and wit lines so fragile.....u leave voters wit nervous break downs
coo closer


I'll start with your Proper Kwallifications, kid you don't even own a rap degree
I got freestyle raps that'll make your lungs collapse like you were O.D.B
who the hell owns a rap degree??
I peeped some of your battles Kwell, half your shit don't even rhyme
Your sig says "Dopeness speaks for itself", I guess that your a mime
worded really bad.. good idea but not as effective as it coulda been
Your like Roy Jones in a heavyweight match, underweight and outclassed
How can you be in "Mind above Body", when your heads stuck in your ass
decent personal i suppose
Is it Kwell or Kwali, I've since your battles so I know it aint Mos Def
This kid wouldn't be dope even if I changed your name to Crystal Meth
'dope' lines = a no no
All your punches are catchin air Kwell while Vango is checking chins
You could create 7 aliases, vote for yourself, and still not even win
very played
Changed the name of this league so much that it's got confusing
Oh now I get why they changed the name, it's cuz Kwell Loves Losing
didn't get it first time.. re-read it.. not bad


v/ kwell

only one bar i didn't particularly like.. rest was solid.

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wow, you gotta be kidding me.

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.