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05-26-04, 07:27 PM
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hurting inside
IP: EC52 949E
As i sit here and wonder what went wrong,
the feeling of pain is oh so strong, hurting inside wanted to break free, locking out all my family, who do i trust and what do i give, do i take my life or or continue to live with all the pain that i have inside and all that i try to hide I want the war to be over weither i lose or win i need the light before I do somthing crazy where everyone judges that as a sin. Do i hurt myself or do i rage again, afflict more pain or sit and think what could have been.  |
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05-27-04, 01:44 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 3240 794D
That is a awesome poem.Out of all the poems that I read from amatures this one makes more since then any other poem that I read from someone who actually knew what they where talking about.
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05-27-04, 02:01 PM
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IP: E57C 347F
I'm liking this alot, it's good for the writer to write stuff that other people are going through. Because the reader can try and look at the writers side, then look at his/her own side and try to relate... overall i was really into this... stayy thaa fuckk upp...
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05-28-04, 08:47 PM
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New to RB
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IP: EC52 949E
Thanks just doing my thing
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05-28-04, 09:57 PM
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Hell Ain't Got Nothing On Me
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IP: 0BCD 0BB3
Thats the second drop of yours I've heard. Both deep an dmoving. Very nice. Stick wit it.
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05-28-04, 10:11 PM
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Its Da Real Deal
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IP: C1DA C961
yo dat was good i tink you should of made it longer bu otha den dat it's good keep doin wat you do
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