Throw away track from 7th End Productions Mixtape, thought id post it up to hear some opinions. First verse is a bit bland, second nearly does track justice, but yeh,like i said throw away track.


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the beat is real nice...on some war type shit..going into battle type shit

i first hear the hook...........its cool...
you come in alright....flow is a bit shacky...need to tighten it up a tad bit
overall this is a cool track..just need to tighten up on the flow, lyrics are fine...
also try upping the quality a bit as well....

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Love the beat...VTZ right? lol...tell me i dont kno my soundclick. vocals are aight, flow gets off point at random points, but overall is pretty solid. the hook is real nice, sounds very mixtapish. i dont really like the way the vocals were mixxed up tho...dont sound quite right,...but with a better mix, i think this cud b a very hot song.

keep up the good work, def

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Listenin'...Beat is crazy...yeah quality aint gr8 fam and the hook is energized which is good..all I heard was "ready for war", pronouciation is lacking well ure australian right so word..

energy is tight..you have that locked on this track, thats hot..delivery is hot..presence is also good..I just can't understand everything that yo'ure saying...pronounciation problems I think...

Breath control fam it's runnin' out..you need to write yo shit so it wont nah mean....

What you did well:

Flow
Delivery
Energy
Emotion
Multis (popsicle bit hot shit)
Presence

Didn't:

Breath Control
Pronounciation
Mixing

7.8/10

can you rtf:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231386

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heard this beat before, hook is not bad, dunno aint really feeling it, my first time hearing you on this type of beat, always heard you on some underground beats,flow is cool, lyrics are soldier type, dope vocab, mmm dunno for the hook man, aint not really feeling it, second verse, love how it comes in,you seem like trying to put too much energy but whispering at the same time, nice mixing, like the small adlib in the back that we can barely hear but can, nice track bro, not your bad, but dope track

lol why do i have a feeling this is the same beat i did my ready for war on, i dont have any speakers or headphones where i am but i def will peep later

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just heard your track, yeh its the same beat, i spose thats what i get for running with the name of the beat.

pitty i got more lyrical on it

yea, good thing i wasnt goin for lyrical, i like yours, but i like mine better

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