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6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-13-05 at 04:18 PM

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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-13-05 03:38 PM.

All u do is “lip shit�, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho�
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u�
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words�, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**

*Says he is puerto rican.. their olympic team is shitty

**Word-play.. he don't got good wordplay, his shit simple

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Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-13-05 03:44 PM.

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^HA he changed his crew name it use to Be L.A.D
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Voted For: Bonecollector

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
GOOD.............
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
OK...........
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
GOOD
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
NICE........
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
LOL......
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
LOL TITE FINSHER
=8/10 A GOOD VERSE SUMMAT DAT U ALWAYS DO............

VS

All u do is “lip shit�, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
NAH...........
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
LOL........
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho�
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
NICE
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u�
SO-SO..
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
OK......
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words�, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**
AIGHT
=7.8/10 ANOTHA NICE VERSE........NOT MUCH 2 COMENT ON REALI..........

V/BONECOLLECTOR BECAUSE HE HAD MORE GOOD PUNCHES.....

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Voted For: Bonecollector

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
Shit Was Aight...Not Serious...5/10
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
Aha...Nice Personal...6.5/10
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
Okay...Dat Was Creative...7/10
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
Not A Hard Hit But Tight Line...6/10
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
Anotha Nice Personal....7/10
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Aha!....8/10...Best Line...I Gave It 2 Bone Cuz His Shit Was Much More Creative...Creativity Is Key In Battles

All u do is “lip shit�, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Nice 2nd Line......6/10
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Aha!........Nice........6/10
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho�
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
Nahhh I'm New So I Dont Get It...2/10
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u�
Not Feelin Da Set Up & Da Tip Line Is Kinda Played...4/10
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
Aha....Nice Personal....6/10
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words�, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play
Dat Was Aight....4.5/10

Overall - BoneCollector Had Harder Direct Hits...Therefore He Gets My Vote

RTF...Any 1 Of My Battle Threads

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Uppin again.......

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Voted For: The Black Plague

Bonecollector's verse:

The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.
Not the best opener, but a nice line. Nice punch also.

keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.
Not that hard. Kinda lost in this one. Shouldve explained it. Because clearly its a personal, but what's his crew name really?

You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*
Wack. Because of the wording

Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...
Nice thinking, but not all that. Just ight for me

..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
I like how this rhymed....that about it.

......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Fairly, the first line is played. You should know that by now. And the other line shouldve been better

Not a hard hitting verse at all. I don't think this is winning material for this battle. Yo punches were too soft, alot of played concept, and alot of bad worded lines. I wasn't feeling this verse. No hate, just not a good verse to me.
The Black Plague's verse"

All u do is “lip shit�, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women
Nice personal. Nice opener too, to top of a bad verse by your oponent

Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes
Clearly a dope personal. Understood. Worded well, and I knew just what you were talking about. LMAO

Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho�
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio
Don't get this personal, but nice rhyming

I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u�
Not worded too good, but still a nice line

No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.
LMAO. true too. I like this line. Mos Def my favorite so far. This was dope

Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words�, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**
lol...Not that hard hitting, but funny. Nice personal.

[B]I give my vote to TBP because he came consistent with his punches, and personals. He didn't have too many played concepts in there, and his verse was rather funny to me. I liked how he didn't hafto explain all his lines, and I still understood them.(the personals). This was just some good RV diss shit right here, and you get my vote.


RTF on battle against esco plz.

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Nice battle. No hate to either of you. Continue to elevate.

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Voted For: Bonecollector

Bone Collector--- Flow was ok, wordplay was decent, and punches were ok...... started out good, didnt like last 2 lines though,

The Black Plague--- Some alright personals, flow was ok, some ok wordplay'.....started out ok and ended ok...

Punches: Bone Collector
Personals: The Black Plague
Flow: The Black Plague
Wordplay: Bone Collector
Structure: Bone Collector
Creativity: Tie

Final Vote------Bone Collector

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Voted For: Bonecollector

v/bonecollector

bone-had way more personals,his structure was nice and clean,he also had great wordplay and harder punches,the flow was more better also i felt,decent opener but a hard ass closer nice way to end it


TBP-your flow was okay not the best, your opener was off i didnt like it,you punches were decent but in some areas seemed forced,decent wwordplay also man.....and you did have a nice closer as well so that a plus

overall with harder hitting punches,and good personals with a nice structure all around...im giving this to bonecollecter,no hate TBP you did decent,bonecollecter just came harder

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Voted For: Bonecollector

Well this was close. But vote goes 2 Bonecollector. He won me ova with the last verse

..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete
Good battle for bonecollector. eazy

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