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5 | 62.50% |
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05-18-05, 09:28 AM
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lmao @ al the votes removed haha......funny shit ha
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05-18-05, 03:12 PM
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Voted For: The Black Plague
couldnt ciome up with much to say about this one....but plague gets the win Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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05-19-05, 11:44 PM
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Voted For: The Black Plague
Damn good battle.....ok heres the break down.... . . Bone---The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff.. ....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.-----nice punch but really didnt hit keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.----nice personal and punch here direct hit You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win.. Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*----complex punch but still a good one Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall.. hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...----oooo nice one this is ur best punch great set up and knock down ..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear.. ....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..----aight multi. but weak punch overall ......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat... So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete-----sweet punch here . . Black--All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women------ddaammnnn great opener straight ko with one bar Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes----another clean punch good one here Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho” Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio----damn thats dirty..lol..another great punch and good wordplay I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”----your only weak punch No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest* Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.-----great punch exellent flow also Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**---aight punch but still hit . . aight i expect this battle to get very very close but i thought that Black had better quality punches and a lil better flow...ma advice to Bone in this battle is really nothing it was a good verse that had many strong points but lacked in certan areas.....for example some of your punches seemed to be forced next time you write something sit back and relax and imagin ur a person that is reading this for the first time...it will help alot.......as for Black all around great verse powerful punches but structure was a lil off try and fix that......my advice to you is to maybe try and add some noticeable punches (links) but thats about it great verse------my advice to both Mcees is try adding some multies. in ur verses it will give you an edge on the competition!!. . with that being said my vote is for Black his verse just had more powerful punches.......but dont get me wrong this was very close......V/ The Black Plague |
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05-19-05, 11:49 PM
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IP: 8A17 F701
my advice to you is to maybe try and add some noticeable punches ******i ment personalls******(links) but thats about it great verse------my advice to both Mcees is try adding some multies. in ur verses it will give you an edge on the competition!!.
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05-20-05, 01:44 AM
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IP: CBD1 4982
Voted For: Bonecollector
i feel bone collector took this one by far he had better wordplay "v twin"thats hot kid nice line punchelines coulda been better but still were better then blacks rhymes were good flow was almost perfect structre a lil off at times but it still worked for this verse personals were on point and hit hard...any way....nice shit cant be mad at it best line-"Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall.. hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all..." 7.9/10 please return the favor Me vs JaEx Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-20-05, 01:49 AM
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IP: CBD1 4982
sorry i forgot to crituqe blacks verse--------------
your verse was lackin alot rhymes were basic the punches were there hit but not hard enough to win the battle wordplay was okay nothing speacil in it structre was good though personals werent anything speacil neither the flow of your verse was very choppy.....no hate though keep doin ya thing man
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05-20-05, 02:47 AM
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IP: B299 6ADF
Voted For: Bonecollector
The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff.. ....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?. HaHa okay opener 7-10 keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick. wow nice personal BLD ha ha 9-10 You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win.. Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..* I like the imagery 8-10 Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall.. hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all... okay maltis but need to work on vocab 5-10 ..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear.. ....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year.. Whats up with the gay jokes? overplayed 5-10 ......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat... So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete Nice ending. HaHa ctrl+alt+Delete that was funny 8.1 - 10 50.1-60 ---------------------------------------------------------- All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women HaHaHa nice opener.. 9-10 Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes Wack 1-10 slippin homie Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho” Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio terri shchavio?¿ Who is this.. weak personal 4-10 I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u” Nice word play here gettin getter 6.7-10 No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest* Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S. whats that have to do with him? 4-10 Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play** Nice wordplay 7-10 39.8 Overall good battle well I personally Think Bonecollector won this. Sorry this is my first time for this. Ill vote more later 39.8-60 The Black Plague 50.1-60 Bonecollector
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05-20-05, 01:11 PM
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^^^ Ok.. i dont know how ya'l havn't heard of terri schaivo.. she was that lady who was ALL OVER THE DAMN NEWS like a month ago.. she was the parapalegic who couldn't talk or read or write.. and her husband took her off life support and let her die..
It was on the news like mad.. dont kno how ya'l didn't hear it
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05-20-05, 01:20 PM
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IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: Bonecollector
The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff.. ....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?. ^^^^Ight Punch solid opener..... keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick. ^^^^This was a good punch mixed wit personals i liked it... You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win.. Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..* ^^^^lol this was another solid punch....Not really played Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall.. hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all... ^^^^Good Personal Wit a Good set up to the punch ..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear.. ....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year.. ^^^^Ight punch not really hard hittin one of the weaker ones. ......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat... So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete ^^^^This was a Solid An Good Endin Punch set up was good an deliver perfect.....u came wit good structure an personals an Punchs A good verse Dropped....7.5/10=Bonecollector All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women ^^^^Hot Opener i liked it one the better punchs u had.... Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes ^^^^This was ight kinda played heard the same concept alot ... Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho” Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio ^^^^Good punch an setup an personal..... I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u” ^^^^Naw weak i heard the waiter tip to much switched around real played No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest* Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S. ^^^^ight punch nuthin special good delivery Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play ^^^^Nice Closin Punch Was good ..... Your verse had some good lines but some played punchs an a little streched.....No Hate......7/10=The Black plague this was a good battle....but bone came consistent an solid the whole time an he Gets my vote.....BoneColletor....RETURN THE FAVOR... |
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05-29-05, 11:01 AM
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Voted For: The Black Plague
The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff.. ....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?. —1, not really a punch keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick. —2, the LAD line has been used by Compose.. so, no You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win.. Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..* —5, decent, not hard hitting though Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall.. hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all... —5, decent ..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear.. ....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year.. —3, avg. been used b4 too ......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat... So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete —6, ur best line overall.. u most had played.. or either weak punches in ur drop here, u didn’t even come as hard in this battle tho.. only had one persona in there, didn’t see any wordplay.. u practically had simple-rhyming in here, but overall.. ur verse was okay, 22/60 All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women —5, decent opener Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes —4, avg. punch Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho” Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio —1, not feeling this punch I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u” —6, pretty decent No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest* Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S. —2, meh, weak Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play** —6, decent persona overall u had an aight drop here too.. almost all of ur punches were hard-hitting, and a couple of them weren’t the structure needs help though.. the personas were decent, but overall u took this battle though.. 24/60
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05-30-05, 06:44 PM
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Yooooooo Diz Wuz Real Close The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff.. ....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?. keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick. You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win.. Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..* Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall.. hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all... ..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear.. ....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year.. ......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat... So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete Nice Closer! Rest Ov Da Verse Wuz Good 2 Sum Real Nice Wordplay & Punz In There, Nuthin 2 Personal, But Ur Lucky He Dint Have Many Personalz Neither, It Wuz Juz Punch Vs Punch, Lyke Tyson/Holyfield Or Sum Shit, And U Previeled, Propps 2 Ya, Real Nice Verse Homeboy All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho” Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u” No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest* Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S. Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play** Pretty Decent Verse Dawg, Sum Iight Mettas, No Personalz Really Besidez Dat Puerto Rico Thang, And I Wuznt Feelin Dat, Culd Ov Worded A Few Linez Better, But U Still Bought It Live, Juz Dint Have Da Creativity In Ya Disses Lyke Bonecollector Did, Good Job Both Yall Holla@Da Link Below Plz, Drop A Vote, Da Battle Iz Whack, It Wuz Mah First Battle, But All Da Mo Reazon 2 Get It Closed! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191943
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