first song; myspace.com/marktimothyschafer
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and link in my threadVV

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shit song......

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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HAHAHA! Oh and dude aint even on the list to post songs up in here anyway.

the reason i left it here is because its featuring someone who is...

bit of a loophole i think..

ill allow it...

but i want the person whose actually on the list to make the thread next time. Big picture your not allowed to make threads here. get J summers to do it if you collab with him again.

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ya'll on some super homo tip

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You been on some super garbo tip...and after a few years on this site...YOU STILL ARE.

eh... im not feeling the vibe.
the beat is kinda just not me.


the flow is pretty sick, i like the idea, and the content is straight as fuck for a commercial song.
something about it rubs me wrong (no homo)

hmmm.

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

its the cool kids black mags beat. all there beats are sick, so if u dont like them then i guess you wouldn't like this song. appriciate the feed, you're one of the few people on here that know what commercial music and catchy sounds are and how they are good when done right.

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you would think after spending years on a site full of homo's like you i'd be able to make a song that homo's like you like huh?

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Did you just call yourself a homo? Good job.

i did if you dont know how to read i guess

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I like cool kids.
I actually dont like this song though. lol

Maybe thats the reason the beat didn't catch me. haha.

but i went back and listened again. i like this versoin better than the original. I jsut never liked Black Magz. but other songs by them... SICKO haha

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

than i accomplished my goal if you think this is anywhere close to as good as the original cuz i thought the original was dope because it was and made money for them, so if i could make a song better than a song that made the originators a lot of many i definately accomplished my goal. if thats true though i should have money in my pocket right now for making the better song, but i dont feel i made the better song, i just made a different song that no one else could make. i want to make money off of songs and if peoples opinions don't help that happen their oppinions mean nothing to me. so please cordinate your opionons on my songs in a way that could improve the song to a point i could make money with it. since no one on here knows how to make money with their songs other than, hmmm no one really on this site, i dont get why they feel their opinions actually matter even the slightest.
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only reason i respect lm's opionons is because his music is marketable, so he has the best clue in my opinion as to what sells. theres very few people on here that i could play the song to people at a party or anyone i know that even enjoys rap and have them not want me to change the song.

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man the song just isnt that good eh... that's all anyone is saying... its not horrible, but it's not good

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yeah man take advice mabe thats why u aint elevating

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