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1.00 - 1.30min ish
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-20-05 at 06:36 AM

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Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 06:05 PM.

enygma has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 08:05 PM.

blud Enygma winning...this bredda aint even got a chance yo
You got a betta chance seein tha holy grail next to a dodo
This bitch does so many tricks wid ECKO's dick he shud b a thai ho
rah yo
I mean he steppin like he in the army on the frontlines
were dus he find tha time....his ass is always home online
This nigga aint in iraq holdin a tech, he back in the tent being the army chef enygma where ma food bitch
so he aint wearin a bulletproof vest, n blud im quick to rip n stick a clip his chest
blud i cant say u got singin on lock and u definently aint in key
BAYYYYYBEEE BGHGKKGKGOIRRLLL
ouch ...damn..
on that note...Im instigating enygma's demise....He couldnt see a winning streak
Wid a naked eye, blud RV got u mistaken guy
cos theres nuttin special flow, i mean its just wackness...but you not spittin it slow
look like u got too many chromosones suffering from down syndrome
feel me, blud how r u daddy, i mean did u have to pay the bitch to shag u
ima grab you.., rip out ur intestines...so that you cant stomach this rhyme
enigma and his family, ima BURY EM, cut em out the game like a ceaserean
enygma ima merk you wussy…but im nervous….its a long time since i beat up some pussy...
u aint seein me, like a blind eye
if the truth hurts...evry punch enygma ever wrote is a lie
u cnt mess wid uk bitch,ull b slew quick,lyrically u cant co - exist
u use punches so jurassically classic im surprised they aint extinct


www.soundclick.com/acuitousprecision

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blud Enygma winning...this bredda aint even got a chance yo
You got a betta chance seein tha holy grail next to a dodo
This bitch does so many tricks wid ECKO's dick he shud b a thai ho
rah yo
I mean he steppin like he in the army on the frontlines
were dus he find tha time....his ass is always home online
This nigga aint in iraq holdin a tech, he back in the tent being the army chef enygma where ma food bitch
so he aint wearin a bulletproof vest, n blud im quick to rip n stick a clip his chest
blud i cant say u got singin on lock and u definently aint in key
BAYYYYYBEEE BGHGKKGKGOIRRLLL
ouch ...damn..
on that note...Im instigating enygma's demise....He couldnt see a winning streak
Wid a naked eye, blud RV got u mistaken guy
cos theres nuttin special flow, i mean its just wackness...but you not spittin it slow
look like u got too many chromosones suffering from down syndrome
feel me, blud how r u daddy, i mean did u have to pay the bitch to shag u
ima grab you.., rip out ur intestines...so that you cant stomach this rhyme
enigma and his family, ima BURY EM, cut em out the game like a ceaserean
enygma ima merk you wussy…but im nervous….its a long time since i beat up some pussy...
u aint seein me, like a blind eye
if the truth hurts...evry punch enygma ever wrote is a lie
u cnt mess wid uk bitch,ull b slew quick,lyrically u cant co - exist
u use punches so jurassically classic im surprised they aint extinct


www.soundclick.com/acuitousprecision

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Acuity Battle


Posting lyrics are for homos

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lol...i only did cos every1 keeps going oh "we cant make out ur crappy UK accent" to UK heads so i thought id eliminate the problem...

Dope diss tho...flow was raw..

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Voted For: Acuity

Acuity

Intro piece was good. Beat blew horribly.

Your qual needs some SERIOUS uppage.

Punches didn't hit that hard, and this shit was real light on personals. "better chance the holy grail laying next to a do-do" - what??? nah. Your flow is off beat too, you delivered the rhyme too early per bar on every bar so it makes your rhyme scheme sound sloppy.


Enyg: that london bridge intro was pretty much a waste since nothing was going on during it. I used this beat once a long time ago, still a good beat.

I hate the effect you use on these vocals. I didn't hear any actual aimed personals at dude really. Just generic punches really. And your flow was off at times. Dunno man, kinda disapointed in this verse personally since here was not one personal at all.

Vote: ac. ac's verse wasn't tremedously powerful either, but it had personals, and with hat it got my vote. 1

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Meh.....just to let you know...

....Ghost Writers is his crew.

.....Skinny Man is some dumb looking shit he had in his sig for a while.

.....Kid say's he's from E10, London.

.....all that talk about inflict a hundred casualties, leave a graphic scene, blah, blah, blah....did you not hear anything that has been hitting London? All those bombs and shit?


Anyway....every person is entitled to their own opinion

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yo i cant b KO'ed.....*dances*.......................

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that's all well and good, but you gotta know your audience and I guaranttee 2/3rds of the peopel that vote on this won't know half of what you're reffering to. Particularly an A: unknown crew (you know we can't see sigs in this thread untill we post in it right?) and his location and shit is no different. I didn't say "hmm..yeah, lemme look up info on acuity before I listen to this". And the portion about leave a graphic scene and so on simply had no impact. It's already kilt to death. Just fell flat. You shouldnt' have to explain your personals outside of the verse man - they should speak the story in the whole track or else you jsut didn't do the job as an Emcee.

Honest crit/vote/etc as always.

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........I did sound like I was bitching a lot, didn't I.

I'm sorry......I honestly appreciate you coming in here and giving your honest opinion. I'll try to be more open minded to your suggestions ™

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Voted For: Acuity

ok ac good flow and beat choice here clearly done punches and disses were also decently done and hit nicely especially the army line hahahahahahahahahaha that was funny shit nicely done here 7/10
enygma wtf is you doing did you try?punches were weak and played already flow was good though as usually as was quality but punches and disses win battles and you aint do that good here making you loss 5/10

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb