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Old 08-24-06, 09:01 PM   #1
Po' Wit.
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By: My Random Thoughts. And Po' It.

Fight to survive
or survive to fight?
Matter it does not.
Or does it really matter?
Live to breathe, or
are we breathing to live,
in a dictators realm
of monopoly.

Tomato or Tomato'?
Questions sent spiraling
through answerless minds
reaping the benefits from
freedomless speech.


Wear your hair up,
wear your hair down.
Do you wear your hair?
Opinions' your stylist.

Mirror Mirror on the wall.
Is it you you see?
Or what you want the mirror to see?

Sit under the apple tree,
reflect on life,
or is life a cracked mirror?

Does an apple a day
keep the doctor away?
Or cause tooth decay.
Or let the other end of the worm play
on the hook so doctors can
reel in a new cancer today.

Walk in your shoes?
Perpetuating blisters crippling me
so i'm as miserable as you? ..... I think not.
I don't think,
or i've become opinionated
in this over-easy, scrambled
never sunny side up
omlet society.

Got milk?
No,
my bones are strong enough
to hold weightless pressure
from stress so powerful.

I'm lovin' it....
Society's future in the kitchen
making minimum wage burgers
from prosthetic cows
to feed the greed; Supersize that.

[Sing along now]
......And i'm proud to be an American,
where atleast I know i'm free.
And I won't forget the foreigners,
who made all my clothes for me..
And i'm proud to stand up!
On top of you,
because your labor means shit to me..
And I have to say, I love this land...
These lyrics were made in Japan...


Just do it.
Tie that noose tight
and drop waste deep in my debt,
as my taxes support
your families welfare.

Be all that you can be!
While your next pay check reads
"Date of Death: August 24, 2006"

Is it in you?
To be an equal
while Joe Shmoe
gets the promotion
and you drown in tears
of eviction.

Have I said enough?
Have I said too much?
"E Pluribus Unum"
in the Coke Machine life.

Remember that.
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Old 08-28-06, 07:10 PM   #2
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shit dude... this shit makes ya really think.. i love that sing along part... got me laughing, and the burger joint.. hahaha

real good structure, the way yall laid this out like random thoughts

i love it man, honestly one of my favorites

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Old 08-28-06, 07:42 PM   #3
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^ It was made by my random thoughts so.. lol yeah

Thanks for the feed.. and i'll be on later to check some of the poems around hither.
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Old 09-01-06, 12:22 AM   #4
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this was a nice emotion put together...random thoughts purged into little stanzas was a real unique feel and drive ya know....real nice read and the content in this was nicely spreaded out aswell as your emotion..

nicely doen PO!...



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