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Old 05-09-05, 01:19 PM   #1
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Old 05-09-05, 01:26 PM   #2
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Old 05-09-05, 04:28 PM   #3
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Old 05-13-05, 07:55 PM   #4
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.............Introduction.......

At first its evolves and Transforms from the Births
From Infant to Child to Adult Learnin 2 Live Firsts
And Survive and Maintain on your own two Feet
Pressing against your Blessings that Mello Deep
Beyond a Normalistic Understanding of the Facts
Between Fiction and Faction of Individuals Acts
With Words like "Dada" and "Mama" start 2 Droppin
And Rotate off the Childs Lips
Without Understanding the Realazation of the Options

............Introduction to ChildHood........
The Cranium and MindFragments start to work N Sync
And Function Controllably to Certain Exstents we Think
That the Juvenile Delequent Thinking Turns to Change
And the Behavior and Language Seems to Turn to Strange
To the Parents that are Used to the Small Jibberish of Past
Vocab that are now Exstinct and the Growth is only the Half
Compaired to the Attitude Changes and Aspects of the Growth
That is in Transformation...In the Bible....It was Even Wrote
That He ...that Follows....Shall Learn.....and Observe Words
That are Constantly Pronounced in the Presence
Of ...........................The Hims......or ....Hers....

.........Introduction to Young Adult Hood......
The Animalistic Actions start to Turn more towards Fashion
And Hip to Whats Happenin and Popularity is very Faction
Upon the Young Adolescent who seems Sometimes New
To Whos Whos and The Clicks and Crews..Who are You?
Amongst Millions and Millions of 13 yr olds Going into
The Teenage Fase of the Amazed and Family turns N 2
A Nucleus that Starts to Descinergrate towards Less
Family Time and Family Dinners and School turns N2 Stress
Due to the Worrying of Boyz and Girls Worrying What 2 Dress
In for the Next..Chemistry Test instead of the Text of Study
and Senior Year Dissolves and The Friends Leave Now
......Left is College...Workforce..and Maybe a few Buddys

.......................AdultHood.......
Responsibilites start to Become more of a Realization to Face
and the Big Boots of the real World start to get Harder to Lace
And the Path that you used to Run no Longer is Appealing
To your Satisfaction and the Option of Leave is More A Feeling
that you want to Witness and a Sample you want to Sample
More and More and the Realazation of Kids become to Ample
to the Fragile Apple known as the Mindframe gets to Bold
Some with Family Some Without eitheir way you Get to Old
to Even Realize or Know......that at any Given time you Could Go.....
Before you have to time to Learn the Facts of Life on your Plate
and the Dreams you Reached 4 are Over....Deaths Here
And..........The Grim Reaper Never Arrives Late....
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Old 05-13-05, 10:06 PM   #5
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From the beginning, it was created, to make things equal and fair...
Until its cover was blown with currruptive dreams and nightmares..
Its seams was exploited and force to resort to the good and evil..
Its fabric struggled to grasp the good in the people...
It was fooled and feeble, the thought of perfection was destroyed and..
Its two layered frame had to deal with right and wrong choices..
So it was knitted as both, became an addition to it unexpectedly..
Things happened for a reason..it became a victim of humanity..

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Get loans and borrow expenses to spend on your college tuition..
Almost fall from the sickness from the cost of bottle prescriptions..
Tension from your boss your rent and your apartment tenants..
Fights and brawls you hop over fences avoiding the law & amendments..
Stick shift stalls on your engine you calling the tow trucking business..
House wall to wall with your infants, while you haul over the kitchen..
In the court halls being convicted as the defendant waits to be sentenced..
You hating this addiction because the scent is keeping you tempted..
The massacre is endless..our Mother Land fighting crisis & famine..
While we watching debates waiting for the deflation of prices & gallons..
People fighting for chances, while our kids still finding their talents..
Finding the answers.....unstable homes still finding their balance..
You frightened & panic, you feeling alone and needing accompany..
While get rich schemes uproot our economy from billion dollar companies..
& blacks still last commonly, whites still number 1 predominently...
And the government promoting free will, but still lacking in honesty..
And honestly..? Why the fuck the hostages ain't been saved yet..?
Teachers making big impacts, but still get the smallest paychecks..
Streets lurking with convicts & rapists..The Law ain't make shit safe yet..
No more virgins...STDs are now more common than safe sex..
No patience...everyday you feeling like your life has been threatened..
No right direction, people in Iraq still getting killed & beheaded..
Superstars seem pathetic; Rape's, scandals, & molestation as a fetish..
Feeling tensed & neglected, so you reduce it with a heroin injection..
Deaths from hoods that you reppin'...it's hectic, but u try to solve 'em..
While its considered common to die from violence than a medical problem..
They don't care that you've fallen..ghetto ran by street communists..
Getting crack, methane, E, & Mary..the demons from the street pharmacists...
They dominant..& in careers, most putting up a tangible fight..
Protesting everything from abortion to Animal Rights..
We an animal in our own mind..clawing our way out of a cage..
But still forced back & tamed..still living life as a slave..
It's like being silent, but in rage...shy, but in pain...
No pride in being saved, so you write what's right on your page..
In this day in age, there's enough change to bring jealousy to a Token..
More chaos, struggle, and order together in a quilt that is woven..
Memories, tragedies, emotions interwined in every color..
Keeping you warm, while in hopes that we'll once unite as Brothers..
Passed down in generations, we add on with a fresh cloth...
Synthetic fibers perfected in hopes to treasure the loss...
Infections, plagues, deceptions, and traps stain it throughout the years..
The shame, the thought of this clout causing doubt and tears..
But we are forced to deal with it...nature & nurture perfectly fits..
As our everyday life is held together...perfectly stitched..
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Old 05-15-05, 12:45 PM   #6
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Uppin this for some votes....
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Old 05-15-05, 03:58 PM   #7
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how the fuck is a tourny gona have no vot8s?
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Old 05-15-05, 09:06 PM   #8
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my vote goes to osiris even though this battleis cvlose and can go both ways both came with fire..vocab was killin good content but O painted a vivid picture in my brain very vivid and u presented alot of questions that havent been answeredlike why the pows aint saved yet why people still geting beheaded in iraq this was a dope battle vote=O
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
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Old 05-15-05, 10:19 PM   #9
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4 sho 1-0 O..............
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Old 05-16-05, 02:40 PM   #10
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Os1ris wins by 1 vote............
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