word im reposting my track cuz none of yall gave feed in phenoms thread...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/54096588239f8614/
son of a gun - 286
beat by phenom

i left most of yall feed. n ill continue to do that, if you can return the favor....dont let me down

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The lyrics are pretty nice, has a good cross over sound to me like Jadakiss.
Not saying you sound like him, but you have that lyrical commercialism to it that he has.
I like the content, and from about 50 til the end.
you snap on it.

the whole Son Of A (Gunshot) part
thing is really gritty. really nice sound to it.

i would bump this.

good shit.

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

yeah, your quality is illy. that gun shot is kinda lame sounding, should get a better gun sound. and idk if this is just w/e but you could make that hook a lot catchier. i like that imma sun of a Gun wit the noise, shit could be dope, should actually make this a more commercial sounding song wit that hook. and i think u should do more echo's on your stuff a mix wit it a lil more to make it catchier. sounds good but has more potential

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beat is pretty dope... your mic presence is real nice, great delivery... flow is sharp... lyrically this shit goes hard too... quality sounds real good, nice mix... some of your punch ins are a bit obvious, but no worse than anyone else I hear do it... this track goes hard homie, nice work...

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phenom is my dude big up alwayz on his productionz i got nuffz of his ish canada big up this track is nice lyrics was proper quality was nice flow an everyting fam good look on dis joint id bump this again it was kinda short thou??remix? lol

yea the lyrics are type dope on here i like the multis and all that nice stuff..keep at it my man

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