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04-23-04, 10:37 AM | #16 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for adebisi:
flow:straight forward no off points 7/10 volcab:good use but still kinda average 6/10 punches:you didn't try and make people laugh in a fun way you wanted to make kingz cry it seemed this was harsh my fav line,"You're not just fucking wack... you give it oral too" so mean 7/10 overall:20/30 breakdown for kingz: flow:good job better then adebisi 8/10 volcab:basic here try harder 5/10 punches:nothing really don't know where people are voting for you cause this seemed more like a verse bout yourself then making fun of him you wasted 5 lines on yourself and when there's only eight to begin with that's not good 5/10 overall:18/30 lacked anything that really hurt adebisi vote--adebisi gets my vote
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04-23-04, 11:45 AM | #17 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Alright, Here's where I stand.........
This is a battle, so punches should be what people are voting on. Adebisi came with the best punches in my opinion, but Kingz did have a few good ones like the pronounce his name line. Adebisi's verse was straight to the point with punches intended to ridicule his opponent......... Vote - Adebisi
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04-24-04, 01:20 PM | #18 | ||||||
THE COUNCIL
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Yea after I read Adebisi battle I knew he'd be in for it. I've seen King come way harder, but still there were enought punches and flow to surpass. Adebisi, ya just need to elivate, people are talk'n like you had this old style, I'd get back to that if it got ya 5 win's fuck what the critics say it can't be that bad.
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04-24-04, 02:35 PM | #19 | |||||
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kingz gets my vote.better style and all that shit good ending and opening lines.thas all i gotta say
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04-24-04, 02:39 PM | #20 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 4289 77F4
this was an aiight battle adebisi had 1 or 2 hard punches i was feelin i thnk this battle would have been better if it was longer....adebisi had some good wordplay and flow couple punches nothing really interesting.....kingz also had a nice verse a couple better punches than adebisi feelin his verse and the opener and closer were pretty ill nice structure and flow good punches/personals good multies....overall good battle
my vote: kingz
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04-24-04, 02:41 PM | #21 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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King won
Explain- better, harder punches. Man I aint even gotta say nothing really because Jpoll hit it all for me also, I agree with him. |
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04-24-04, 02:49 PM | #22 | |||
Light Weight
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Wow... you all are complete morons
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04-24-04, 02:50 PM | #23 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 9BC5 A43E
Kingz placed all his shit in da write place nice barz overall almost a big victory
But adebisi would have won it if he put a lil more thought into it. this is the type of battle that you have to read two or three timez. man this wuz closer than i though after the first time i read it. yall should battle soon Vote kingz
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04-24-04, 03:05 PM | #24 | |||||
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Kings Won
Bisi Had One Line I Liked, That Oral Shit Kingz Came Wit Better Punches And The Last One Was True Ur Name Is Hard To Pronounce
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04-25-04, 12:36 AM | #25 | |||||
AKA Cereal Shelf
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Vote - Kingz
DUDE IS NICE OMG YO HE WAS LYRICALLY MURDERIN U YO DONT HATE DAT NIGGA IS SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICK HE WAS KILLIN IT WIT DAT WORDPLAY N MULTIS YO NO HATE BUT ADEBSI IS GETTIN DRS RIGHT NOW AND OMG KINGZ TRY OUT FOR MY CREW WE GON COMMIT LYRICAL RAPE ON DESE NIGGAZ!
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04-25-04, 01:11 AM | #26 | ||||||
retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Quote:
rofl
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04-26-04, 08:13 AM | #27 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
9-3 kingz wins this
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