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05-03-04, 10:56 AM
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i changed my title !!
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mic_wrecker vs. spiky2k8
IP: 275E DC37
deadlines:
battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-03-04, 11:04 AM
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#2
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
checkin in ready to destroy dis nigga let's do it check in spike
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05-03-04, 09:04 PM
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#3
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4E84 E519
i'm check in now i all ready know i'm fin to lose so fuck it
i'm go'n to battle u any way aight u spit yo verse first aight |
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05-03-04, 09:52 PM
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#4
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4E84 E519
i'm spitn my ryhmes try'n to not waste no time
with little pet't shit caus u fin to get yo ass kicked/ come on u could of rap da first time but this time i'm i'm finm to fuck up yo mined/ this aint dream my shit gone make want to scream caus i aint blow out no steam/ i'm da king of this rap game i'm not ashamed if i win or lose caus u losen yo cool/ yo rap ainr as serious as mine caus your sound more like sister sister try tobe some fuckn hookers/ come on man u know u fin to win so i'm gonna ask for a wishh from Genie La Jin/ u probably sayn my raps are and there really rhyming/ yo rap see like butter knife but i cant even rap on this fuckn site/ i'm only 13years old on this mic still riding with training wheels on my bike/ so i'm fin to leave this site to write rap caus i'm still tryn to pick out the naps/ peace vote 4 me not against |
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05-04-04, 11:17 AM
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#5
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
y waste time spittin against this romper room emcee/
wen his rhymes are like the kids mr jackson prefers.....ELEMENTREE!!!/ u should have heeded yo momma warnin im nothin to play wit// u culd elevate yo shitty rhymes an still be in the basement// so just face it you basic// yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces// you wouldnt have a winning hand if u was ambidextorous// my corrosive flow eat throrgh ya face, with the mic i preech my message// yo flow just trash no way it is a diamond in the rough// you could *SPIT* 99 bars and that dumb shit still not could b enough// use yo middle school english to upgrade yo rap gramnmer// caz readin yo rhymes, u sound like an emcee wit a stammer// yo battle verse just wasted time off my life// if u was tryin to cut me w/ ya punches u used the blunt end of the knife// imma give u an option the next ime u face wrecker// give up throw in the towel i'd hate 2 put another loss in ya record  Last edited by mic-wrecker : 05-04-04 at 10:55 PM. Reason: left out a word |
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05-04-04, 11:18 AM
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#6
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
uppin 4 votes yall.................................
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05-04-04, 12:06 PM
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#7
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Street Royal-T
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IP: 3EEB 5381
you wouldnt have a winning hand if u was ambidextorous//
my corrosive flow eat throrgh ya face, with the mic i preech my message// at first i thought this line killed it bu then i though again and realised that ambidrextrous people dont have a winning hand as they are both equal so that was a weak punch michael jackons punches are way played y waste time spittin against this romper room emcee/ wen his rhymes are like the kids mr jackson prefers.....ELEMENTREE!!!/ u should have heeded yo momma warnin im nothin to play wit// u culd elevate yo shitty rhymes an still be in the basement// ok punches much better than anythin from spike spike ya shit was ELEMENTREE!!! lol naa but u need to improve vocab and get some better meta and rhymes in there ya structure was iight tho v/ wrecker |
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05-04-04, 03:10 PM
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#8
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
yupp im uppin
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05-04-04, 03:13 PM
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#9
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retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
spike you verse was weak. and that ambidextrous line was actually kind of funny, and i read it a different way, and mic wrecker wins anyway because spike needs to hella elevate, and he'd still be in the basement. true shit.
i mean spikey: "i'm still 13...." <-- that line was whack... wtf are you knocking yourself for?
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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!
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05-04-04, 03:15 PM
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#10
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
appreciated
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05-04-04, 07:57 PM
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#11
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 552E B87B
yo mic killed this battle off
mic had a far better flow to his spit and his was tructured better. i've told u spiky to fix ure structure and work on ure flow and u still aint doin it. mic came hard with them punches and straight beat ure ass cuz none of ure shit was hittin. that ambidextrous shit was wack cuz u didnt know what it actually meant. and u just showed no creativtiy, whereas mic showed some in his spit taking this battle easily. V/ - mic wrecker
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05-04-04, 10:07 PM
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: 3240 794D
ambidextorous means use of both hands i no wat it mean, an the nigga wuldnt have a winning hand if he used both of them caz he shitty.....maybe YALL dont no wat ambidexterous mean....the only thing i dont no how to do w/ ambidextiorous is spell it...lol
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05-05-04, 12:22 AM
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#13
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5340 5C6C
well i knew that i was gone close anyway man so fuck it i dont care
just another lose man for spiky2k8 |
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05-05-04, 05:15 AM
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#14
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I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
the breakdown
first spiky i'm spitn my ryhmes try'n to not waste no time with little pet't shit caus u fin to get yo ass kicked/ come on u could of rap da first time but this time i'm i'm finm to fuck up yo mined/4 this aint dream my shit gone make want to scream caus i aint blow out no steam/3 i'm da king of this rap game i'm not ashamed if i win or lose caus u losen yo cool/ yo rap ainr as serious as mine caus your sound more like sister sister try tobe some fuckn hookers/ come on man u know u fin to win so i'm gonna ask for a wishh from Genie La Jin/ u probably sayn my raps are and there really rhyming/ yo rap see like butter knife but i cant even rap on this fuckn site/ i'm only 13years old on this mic still riding with training wheels on my bike/ so i'm fin to leave this site to write rap caus i'm still tryn to pick out the naps/ seriously you need to learn something original...please go to teaching forum... keep it elevatin ya heard... 5/10 now for wrecker y waste time spittin against this romper room emcee/ wen his rhymes are like the kids mr jackson prefers.....ELEMENTREE!!!/ 8 haah u should have heeded yo momma warnin im nothin to play wit// u culd elevate yo shitty rhymes an still be in the basement// 6 played so just face it you basic// yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces// 5 played and bad flow you wouldnt have a winning hand if u was ambidextorous// my corrosive flow eat throrgh ya face, with the mic i preech my message// 7 decent yo flow just trash no way it is a diamond in the rough// you could *SPIT* 99 bars and that dumb shit still not could b enough// 7 use yo middle school english to upgrade yo rap gramnmer// caz readin yo rhymes, u sound like an emcee wit a stammer// 7 yo battle verse just wasted time off my life// if u was tryin to cut me w/ ya punches u used the blunt end of the knife// 7 imma give u an option the next ime u face wrecker// good battle vote mic wrecker |
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05-05-04, 10:57 AM
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i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for spiky2k8:
flow:no off spots it worked pretty well not too complex either though 6/10 volcab:basic not much to say you didn't really seem to put much effort here 5/10 punches:not much some open disses nothing really personal and your best lines were at the end and they made fun of you more then anything saying your still using training wheels?? ha ha ha good job at putting yourself down try next week to direct that shit at your oppenent 4/10 overall:15/30 i've seen worse atleast breakdown for mic_wrecker: flow  ff on some of them lines that were alittle long but overall good jbo 6/10volcab:better then spiky but still room to improve 6/10 punches:you had some direct punches which spiky didn't so hands down against him you win. but for furture refrence most of your lines were played and you should try to get some original ones best line,"yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces//" 6/10 overall:18/30 alright verse good to see you showing up this time vote--mic wrecker
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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