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Old 05-07-03, 02:28 AM   #1
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A Run Down The Road Of Darkness

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coming back with the all new
"a run down the road of darkness"

*My feet flow like a icy cold river*
*The cold air injects and provides a shiver*
*A breathe at my throte which fails to deliver*
*My hearts begs for more*
*but ive given all i can giver her*
*A beat Blares inside my head*
*And Ever Lastnig Run Which Ends In Me Dead*
*A voice from within my head gives a loud shout*
*The Voices in my head are screaming to get out*
*With a trip and a smash*
*I lay on darknesses grass*
*I die face down*
**********SO YOU CAN KISS MY ASS*****
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Old 05-07-03, 04:43 AM   #2
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this belongs in poetry forum.....sounded too freeverse poetry.....pic a topic das more specific n tell it.....dont just describe shit.....no hatin though....was aight....
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