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check in. new rules is its blind spit. drop in 30 minutes...12 lines.

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Without a fee i'll leave this kids face filled with nix and cuts
Thought i was battling someone good, must've mixed em up
Phoenix legendary? cuz he can resurrect himself from his ashes
But a dust pan, broom and fire place would take care of him fastest
Groveling at my feet, always pulling my leg for a quick battle Peasant
Bird of prey? better get on your knees and worship when i'm present
Just wait until our verses parallel, gone in a flash of mass destruction
Foenix gets an F because he was shunned to silence in class discussion
He tries to act hungry, i'd give em bird seed but his rule states no feeding
So in a flash, he takes his last gasp from lack of eating, moments fleeting
Unlike his memories of the past,badly lashed back from severe beating
Maybe next time you won't be so blind when u spit, cuz seeing is believing

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Elite now diversified wit the addition of this diverse kid
Now its split with kids who earned it...
...and herbs like him who don't fucking deserve it
You're worthless...and i'm just being earnest when i say...
You'll never get in for battling cuz...
...even E letting you in topical was a mistake
Ya last collab was horrible...whole love story seemed fake...
So lemme give you new inspiration...
...by beating your chest till your heart breaks
I carve veins and scar face...i always strike perfect
But if this kids a bitch, he's even easier to hit...
...I just aim between his tits
Kid claims diverse? You liar...ya name makes me laugh
Cuz your only attempted weapon's text...
...you're even horrible at that
It's ironic, I'm on my 11th, sep i already devoured the kid
And ya shitty verse crashed to the ground
...harder than the fucking twin towers did

v/pheoniix

diverse-i wasnt feelin ya verse that much...it was kinda boring to me...your punches landed ok...i feel u could've been a lil bit more creative...your verse picked up a lil bit at the end though...i liked ya closer it was ya best bar....ok verse overall...6/10

phoeniix- nice verse....u took this battle cuz ya punches landed harder and your personals were better....i felt ya verse was more interesting than diverse's u had more creativity better personals and harder punches nice verse....8/10

v/pheoniix

hit this honestly please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112534

Without a fee i'll leave this kids face filled with nix and cuts
Thought i was battling someone good, must've mixed em up
hmm...i guess....pretty alright...5/10

Phoenix legendary? cuz he can resurrect himself from his ashes
But a dust pan, broom and fire place would take care of him fastest
nice one right chea...7/10

Groveling at my feet, always pulling my leg for a quick battle Peasant
Bird of prey? better get on your knees and worship when i'm present
nice again...8/10

Just wait until our verses parallel, gone in a flash of mass destruction
Foenix gets an F because he was shunned to silence in class discussion
hmmm...ok...5/10

He tries to act hungry, i'd give em bird seed but his rule states no feeding
So in a flash, he takes his last gasp from lack of eating, moments fleeting
coulda been worded better...4/10

Unlike his memories of the past,badly lashed back from severe beating
Maybe next time you won't be so blind when u spit, cuz seeing is believing
meh...4/10

33/60 for Diverse






Elite now diversified wit the addition of this diverse kid
Now its split with kids who earned it...
...and herbs like him who don't fucking deserve it
pretty good...not the wording though...6/10

You're worthless...and i'm just being earnest when i say...
You'll never get in for battling cuz...
...even E letting you in topical was a mistake
meh...4/10

Ya last collab was horrible...whole love story seemed fake...
So lemme give you new inspiration...
...by beating your chest till your heart breaks
alright...6/10

I carve veins and scar face...i always strike perfect
But if this kids a bitch, he's even easier to hit...
...I just aim between his tits
nope...3/10

Kid claims diverse? You liar...ya name makes me laugh
Cuz your only attempted weapon's text...
...you're even horrible at that
solid...7/10

It's ironic, I'm on my 11th, sep i already devoured the kid
And ya shitty verse crashed to the ground
...harder than the fucking twin towers did
eh..not really...5/10


31/60..for phoeniix


Diverse wins...i like his punches just a little bit better...though phoeniix had
a pretty sweetlike structure..the punches didnt beat out
diverses' in my opinion...late

Without a fee i'll leave this kids face filled with nix and cuts
Thought i was battling someone good, must've mixed em up
ok...kinda played idea
Phoenix legendary? cuz he can resurrect himself from his ashes
But a dust pan, broom and fire place would take care of him fastest
LMAO...Nice..Dope punch and personal
Groveling at my feet, always pulling my leg for a quick battle Peasant
Bird of prey? better get on your knees and worship when i'm present
ok
Just wait until our verses parallel, gone in a flash of mass destruction
Foenix gets an F because he was shunned to silence in class discussion
blah
He tries to act hungry, i'd give em bird seed but his rule states no feeding
So in a flash, he takes his last gasp from lack of eating, moments fleeting
1st line is nice..2nd is jus ok
Unlike his memories of the past,badly lashed back from severe beating
Maybe next time you won't be so blind when u spit, cuz seeing is believing
ok..played concept
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Elite now diversified wit the addition of this diverse kid
Now its split with kids who earned it...
...and herbs like him who don't fucking deserve it
ok punch and personal
You're worthless...and i'm just being earnest when i say...
You'll never get in for battling cuz...
...even E letting you in topical was a mistake
ok
Ya last collab was horrible...whole love story seemed fake...
So lemme give you new inspiration...
...by beating your chest till your heart breaks
good concept...ok delivery
I carve veins and scar face...i always strike perfect
But if this kids a bitch, he's even easier to hit...
...I just aim between his tits
lol...nice punch
Kid claims diverse? You liar...ya name makes me laugh
Cuz your only attempted weapon's text...
...you're even horrible at that
ehh..kinda played
It's ironic, I'm on my 11th, sep i already devoured the kid
And ya shitty verse crashed to the ground
...harder than the fucking twin towers did
blah..played

I give this to Diverse..I think he came with harder personals and punches..Also was more creative in his lines. Phoeniix came well..but had too much filler and played stuff. Win=DIverse

Please drop an honest vote here. I took the time for you..Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786

Without a fee i'll leave this kids face filled with nix and cuts
Thought i was battling someone good, must've mixed em up
nah
Phoenix legendary? cuz he can resurrect himself from his ashes
But a dust pan, broom and fire place would take care of him fastest
ok
Groveling at my feet, always pulling my leg for a quick battle Peasant
Bird of prey? better get on your knees and worship when i'm present
pray/prey lines are played
Just wait until our verses parallel, gone in a flash of mass destruction
Foenix gets an F because he was shunned to silence in class discussion
nah
He tries to act hungry, i'd give em bird seed but his rule states no feeding
So in a flash, he takes his last gasp from lack of eating, moments fleeting
nope
Unlike his memories of the past,badly lashed back from severe beating
Maybe next time you won't be so blind when u spit, cuz seeing is believing
ok

I expected better. The punches just didnt hit hard enough

Elite now diversified wit the addition of this diverse kid
Now its split with kids who earned it...
...and herbs like him who don't fucking deserve it
nah
You're worthless...and i'm just being earnest when i say...
You'll never get in for battling cuz...
...even E letting you in topical was a mistake
eeeh
Ya last collab was horrible...whole love story seemed fake...
So lemme give you new inspiration...
...by beating your chest till your heart breaks
ok
I carve veins and scar face...i always strike perfect
But if this kids a bitch, he's even easier to hit...
...I just aim between his tits
nope
Kid claims diverse? You liar...ya name makes me laugh
Cuz your only attempted weapon's text...
...you're even horrible at that
just not hitting
It's ironic, I'm on my 11th, sep i already devoured the kid
And ya shitty verse crashed to the ground
...harder than the fucking twin towers did
nah

I was dissapointed. I seen you come way iller against som kid a week or so ago(when you dissed his daughter ) on this one, it seems like you just didnt try. For more ok lines, i would have to give this one to diverse

v/d

Pleeeeease return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113081

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uppin this shit for votes...........................

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This was a good battle i'd say really close but diverse took this by a hair..

P- you had a great stat and some very creative lines but i felt some not as hard as Diverse. sometimes i felt the punches lacked creativity and originality and could have been worded differently to improve the punch. but all in all still a pretty good verse.

Diverse. good all round verse. your punches were good but the start i thought was a little tipsy. after your first bar everything came together. your punhes were more consistant and came across nicer.

Close battle...good verses from both

Return the faver an vote honestly

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111621

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

damn, one more vote to close this battle, let's get some more honest votes to finish this shit up

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