its like no matter how hard u try u'r love always diss you
in my life so far... i dont think this world created enough tissue
they wanna cry and leave all pissed with some sick-news
then 2 hours later wanna hug up all close an say they miss you
forget you... if you dont think about me now u'l forget later
when u all drunk in the bar and trying to get on the elevator
to get to the dancer floor... bump and grind like u wanna romance more
go-ahead and dont think why u taking a chance for, make sure that pussy tight like a tense whore
wanna come back home after a long night... then cuddle after a wrong fight
when u know im so tight.. lipstic smear this dont fit like a lamp with a wrong light
push shorty off my bed... like what the fuck im horney i want some head...
hassatated then her neck lead... and didnt stop till her lips felt dead...
then i smushed her head like what the fuck? smacked her with my cage
like bitch spread ya leg's... scream im wilding but open up like go-ahead
1 stroke 2 stroke... shit a bit loser then usesual
body started to shake... im about to cum... then shit got crusioual
cuz after the 3ed scream.. i punch the bitch in the mouth
saw the blood leak.. dont speak.. just get the fuck out the house
not on my day so i,
grab her hair... said u love me... she said yes.. well i dont care
cuz when u was out last night bitch i was there
in the back having a drink... asking myself what the hell is she doing
2 long years and a child... the night before a birth with a happy ending already ruin
she beg me to stop but the hit came repetedly
i said do you love me.. she waiting.. i said repeat to me...
then she mumble i did.. i said dont lie bitch.. guess what im taking my kid
she grab my leg so i kick the bitch off... grab the hammer then split her wig
look at the pool of blood like what the fuck just happen
i just seen my wify brain drop like i was crapp'in
now im tearing out my eyes... witht he picture thought that kept relapsing
the air i breath started gasping...closed my eyes and saw noting but white like a napkin
felt a push by my side... saw her face with a present and ballon like whhha?.. danm i was just napp'ing

in the back of my head im like i wish things never go right there
cuz that would be the worst kind of birth-party nightmare...

dope shit.. kind of like u feeling alone or betrayed... i used to be good at these types of raps.. not so much anymore.. kinda faded out of it.. well it was a good story to read.. kept me hooked. nice word play... in some parts it was a lot like slims shit in one of his songs... dont rememeber which one tho.. but good shit i liked it..some good rhymes others basic... i know u can do better then that.. ive seen it..but guess u wasnt feeling it.. no doubt tho pretty good shit... keep comin...

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