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Old 01-22-04, 04:45 AM   #1
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LudaCris: The trail of life

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Its the feeling you get
in the pit
of your stomach
that aching pain
like flying rain
its the lightning
its frightning to know
that your on your own
broke...
alone...
your a joke
you have noone
no life
but still you strife
to be the best
higher than the rest
but then death
you fall
never to get up again
and that is that.

give me some replys you guys asap please.

or email me at diablo_z_sof2@hotmail.com

thanks guys

Last edited by LuDaCrIs : 01-22-04 at 04:46 AM. Reason: need to get rid of the typo at top
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Old 01-22-04, 04:48 AM   #2
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That woz ok, but ya need to elevate. no hate tho!!
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Old 01-22-04, 04:50 AM   #3
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elevate? elaborate plz
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Old 01-22-04, 04:55 AM   #4
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Old 01-22-04, 05:04 AM   #5
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thx man, my 1st u c im a bit rusty
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Old 01-22-04, 10:23 AM   #6
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callin out ludacris bitch ass

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yo battle me now unless u scardtake da loss like a man
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Old 01-22-04, 10:24 AM   #7
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so am i
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Old 01-22-04, 10:26 AM   #8
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come on dawg wat u scard
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Old 01-22-04, 08:43 PM   #9
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this was good for a newb, had a good sence of where you wanted to go...i think you should try and think a little more about your lines cuz you had a great idea just didnt finish i thought...keep at it..you can only elavate
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Old 01-23-04, 05:15 AM   #10
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Exclamation come on bizmark!

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Come on man il wipe da floor wit you. you name da place and il kick da crap out 'o' you lyric.

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