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03-10-05, 02:18 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Tick tock
IP: CDF7 CA5C
Why is time such a precious commodity
Is it because there’s finite supply a for everybody The second’s tick by and death draws nearer And this thing called life gets a little bit clearer See every person says they would never sell there soul Your souls is made up from the memories it holds When you are done with life what will you’r soul derive Just a remembrance of working form nine to five? The time you spend with your family and the ones u love Should be remembered and cherished far above Whatever it is you do with the rest of your time But I want you to know why I designed this rhyme My only porous was to make you realize Your selling your soul one hour at a time |
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03-10-05, 02:20 AM | #2 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: CDF7 CA5C
i'm tha new guy i guess i just want to know if yal think these are any good
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03-10-05, 11:32 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 8AB2 5BB6
i liked it.. it was a lil basic but it was a nice start.. i think you should take it back to the lab. and work on it a little more. but it was a nice start... keep' droppin
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