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Old 03-22-07, 11:58 AM   #1
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Chosen Is

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I did this for another site.... so there's refences to heavy weights on that site
and I go by Chosen tha name was awready used when I signed up

iight Here Goes


Chosen Is

An Abomination when I bomb a nation, I'm a martyr laughin'/
I'm a fire starter, part of evil that'll startle Manson/ (Charles Manson)
I'm a larger figure that'll starve a witness/
Yo I'll carve a victim 'till the prison system drops my charge and sentence/
I'm a global vision flowin' over vision, No one's noticin' him/
I'm the vocal wisdom, Knowin' only that your Pope Is Christian/
I'm the hope that's givin' to a country of plagues/
I'm the Tsunami that'll turn your fuckin' country to waves/
I am the reason that these people breath and speak how they speak/
I am the treason that the people breed and preach how they preach/
I am the regicide...also fratricide and genocide/
Homocide on my spare time, but cops'll let it ride/
I'm the bribe that you pay to the law/
Fuckin' the bride that you say you adore, I am a stain in her hall/ haha
I am the fear in the heart of the brave/
I am the spear being held by the drawings in the dark of a cave/
I am the weapon in the evidence room/
I am the evidence to prove that the use of the weapon was crude/
But I am Me, I'm the moment of truth/
I have a use, and a future.....So what kind of moment are you?/


"FARTHEST FROM HARDSHIPS", a "MARTIAN AND MARTYR"//
"SCARRED WITH THE RAWNESS", a "MONSTER-BRED FATHER"//
or "BRETHREN TO HEATHENS", "MESSING WITH DEMONS"//
"TESTING BELIEFS IN" God to "RESONATE SEETHING"//
a set of the reason? shit, my "FACTS LAUGH AT THE REBELS"//
my homie Prophet said it best, I "TAP DANCE WITH THE DEVIL"//
raps passin the level scrolled across all of man-"KIND'S IRIS"//
but so cryptic not even human mind can "DEFINE IT"//
a tyrant so quiet, a "MIRACULOUS SILENCE"//
a "GALLACTIC ALLIANCE" defiance defined in a "SPECTACULAR SCIENCE"//
sick "REACTION OF VIOLENCE" most lethal "BASTARD OF PIRATE"//
"BLASTIN THE RIOTS" through "ACTIONS APPLIANCE"//
supplied with the evilest weapons to "GO FORTH"//
chasing niggas with a plyers and "BLOW TORCH"// (some Pulp Fiction shit)
my flows poor? I "LIVE FAST" and then "SPIT TRASH"//
to "REMIX WRATH" into what you now know as my "BLISS RAPS"//
this, that, or the other "WEAPON OF USE"//
it only takes me an 8th of a "SECOND TO PROVE" what a smith and "WESSON WOULD DO"//
stepping to who? I do it as simply a "FICKLE TRICK"//
blood "TRICKLES QUICK" my "SYMBOL IS" a "TRIPLE SIX"//

...the root of all evil, the scoop for all people
The proof that the truth, tells troops are deceitful
There's no good deeds, cuz every hood breeds
99 bad, and only 1 percent good seeds
No palm reader can see my future, or psychic, I'll sidekick
One word describes me, and only one name describes sick
So why wait? for a chance at profitable life?
With glamour, like a picket fence and hospitable wife
These type of things a street king would dream to have
Wasted memories, cuz sleeping is the only time it seems to last
Faded tears cause a hood legend to relive his nightmares
Fight fair, bright glare in deaths eyes; quite scared
Pistol in hand, missiles at glance, far distant from man
Could see thru most clear like crystals with sand
So I say, stop dreaming when you hit these streets
Cuz there's plenty time to dream, when you six feet deep......

"PRAY TO THE BEAST", you a "FAKER TO ME" from "CASES TO KEYS"//
you "SNAKE ME AND LEAVE" deface the fakers, I'm "MAKING YOU BLEED"//
I "RANK IN THE STREETS" ya "FATE IS MY PIECE", "AIMED AT YA TEETH"//
"RAISING THE HEAT", "PLAYING FOR KEEPS" ya fate "TAKE IT OR LEAVE"//
the traces of theives, "LEFT BEHIND" your "BREATH IS MINE"//
the "SECOND I" put the 'bullet in ya brain' so you keep "'DEATH IN MIND'"//
who's next in line? my mind is equal to that "SAVAGE OF GERMANY"//
the only "AZTEC FROM MERCURY" that's "TRAPPED IN A PEARL-TO-BE"//
theres no "CHANCE THAT YOU MERKING ME", I "MASTERED THE CURRENCY"//
of the Greeks after I was through "CAPTURING HERCULES"//
my stature's the purest thing, my thoughts are an "ELIPTICAL ORBIT"//
so "CRYPTIC AND MORBID" the acient heiro-"GLYPHS WILL ADORE IT"//
yall stick to absorbtion, I reamain the "OSMOSIS"//
leave all "ROBBED HOPELESS" of their image- another "LOST FOCUS"//
this is the Mob boss, notice, I "KNOW VIOLENCE" and "HOLD RIOTS"//
leave "FOES SILENT" I'm the "WHOLE CRISIS" bow now to "OSIRIS"//

droppin sick sockin clicks cocks not toppin this
poppin chicks jockin twat hot as tha apocalypse
a man cynicial kneel when my pen is full
multi's can't insult me i'll kill a fool wit' a syllable
better than God's City, beter than Bonez, better than Sin*
anybody think there better than him get shook out the sweater their in (ohh)
dudes useless, i spew fluids and flip two's ruthless
uncooth usage with punch's that get biters toothless (blaow)
an individual on some 360 degree lyrical delivery shit
anybody appearin this sick's considered inter-fearin wit' it
and must be destoryed immediately, heat deployed repeatedly
my noise be the key to none of these boy's defeatin me'
break it down to a 'phenome' to spin any enemy
.. from michigan to tennesee, you'd swear there was ten of me
spit hennesy.. i'm sicker than liqour if ya sober than cop me
appropriately stocky, humblin cats that be overly cocky
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Old 03-22-07, 12:02 PM   #2
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Old 03-22-07, 02:55 PM   #3
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i be back to drop a proper replay to this but from those first couple of bars i read this shit seem to be aight.....

be back in a min...
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Old 03-23-07, 01:10 AM   #4
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Yo dis was koo son

8/10
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Old 03-23-07, 02:53 PM   #5
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I'm still uppin to this shit
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Old 03-26-07, 08:11 PM   #6
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I Knew Sum1 As Big Headed As U Would've Spent Less Time Writin Rhymes And More Time Frontin.. Enough Said........ All In All... It Wasnt Bad But You Got A Long Way To Go Before U King Of Ne Multiz... YOU DONT NEED TO EMPHASIZE YA WORDS ON HERE DAWG... THEY KNOW... YA STYLE IS OBVIOUSLY YOUNG AND IF U DEVELOP IT NICELY YOU'LL DO OKAY... STOP HATIN ON YA COMPETITION THO U GOTA EARN RESPECT OR IT AINT WORTH SHIT
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Old 03-27-07, 02:30 PM   #7
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me fronting doggie this is just a warm up homie trust me my style is perfect son..... I just dont drop here cuz niggaz like you always hating
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Old 03-27-07, 02:32 PM   #8
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n another thing... nigga I been here for a while..... quite longer than you... dont tell me about this site homie.... trust me I know how shit works I do wut I does... I done dropped only 3 drops n I got more respect than you home
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Old 03-31-07, 10:39 PM   #9
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It was iight i was feeling it.............................
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Old 04-02-07, 01:40 PM   #10
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The Point Is, I Dont Care, You're Ego Doesnt Match Ya Boots Lol... So Whateva.. I Aint Guna Talk Shit Wit U...
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Old 04-03-07, 06:00 PM   #11
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My Ego Dont Match... homie I could drop some shit that'll make you quit rappin honestly now chill while I'm still being nice to ya
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Old 04-04-07, 03:06 PM   #12
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No offense, but stfu or battle or something to settle this don't spam your whole thread with an arguement or spam his thread. Now this piece was pretty cool I liked it. Kind of hard to read with it capitalized and quotated but it didn' bother much. Nice flow and keep it coming bro.
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Old 04-09-07, 06:27 PM   #13
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i was feeling this on some parts i give it a 7
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Old 04-09-07, 07:34 PM   #14
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I have some questions...

How old are you?

What's with the completely different format and style between verses? It is just begging for me to accuse you of biting, but I cbf looking for evidence.

Why would you justify some crap about your name and other sites or something that nobody even cares about? It could be to cover up your biting, but I don't know.
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Old 04-09-07, 09:27 PM   #15
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Damn man, this was a big read! overall I would give it all 7/10 there were some pretty good parts in there but then there were a few parts that dragged on in my opinnion. Keep writing homey your mos def on the right track.
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