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Old 03-27-04, 01:33 PM   #1
taciturn
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Help With Rhymes!!!

IP: AC1E 1E02

my rhymes seem to be pretty good, their just seems to be something wrong with them, when i say read off the lines they sound wierd, but when i say the words im rhyming they sound ok, heres a link, any suggestions

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117399
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Old 03-27-04, 02:48 PM   #2
Enhance
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Because your punches are not good & your rhyme`s are lame Boo`s what the fuck is that Flow & Vote cmon you can do better look at one of my verses.

Last edited by Con Kapone : 03-27-04 at 06:17 PM.
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