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Old 06-06-06, 08:25 AM   #16
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And, now its 4-0.....
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Old 06-06-06, 06:27 PM   #17
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this is close, but i feel rush over played the nik name plays.. i mean it must be quite played anyway for fletch but yeah, nik came with that style that seems like hes diong ti easy, nothing particularly dope.. it was consistent and effective, where as rush had some nice clever shit but it just got over used which took away the quality for me

so i vote nik... nice battle
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Old 06-06-06, 06:49 PM   #18
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Check it,
It’s the word kid. . spit your verse, and get dropped to the floor
As we see your style catching on. .
. .to the vicious hook I send to your jaw.

You a hardcore battler, well I’m a pool player mate
But I don’t need to be given a cue, to fucking sink the number 8
Rush is all gung-ho, but the truth is he won’t do well
‘Coz I could give him a database of personals. .
. .and you’d still never see him Excel!

Rush, your verses are wack. . but its not your fault as such
‘Coz how can you expect to spit fire – when vote-wise you CO2 much.

^^dope shit nick lol hahaha

rush lingo


^really? i find that false because truthfully i bomb vets
if i suck so bad..
that would explain why last week YOU stole MY concept



this dude is hopeless, peeps like me, you like fake drugs – bogus
call me a Dime. cuz it'll take two Nicks to equal my dopeness

^^these were cool but too many nick punches man...maybe 2 would be cool just to much i didn't mind ur verse but nick took this

vote-nick fletcher
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Old 06-06-06, 07:58 PM   #19
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Check it,
It’s the word kid. . spit your verse, and get dropped to the floor
As we see your style catching on. .
. .to the vicious hook I send to your jaw.
doesnt rhyme...
You ain’t on my level, and its your wackness that’s the cause
I mean, I lost twice last week bro. .
. .and still came out with a better record than yours.
wtf? this doesnt rhyme either. is it the accent maybe?
You a hardcore battler, well I’m a pool player mate
But I don’t need to be given a cue, to fucking sink the number 8
cool
Rush is all gung-ho, but the truth is he won’t do well
‘Coz I could give him a database of personals. .
. .and you’d still never see him Excel!
pretty good
I’m a school bully yo, the biggest motherfucker in my class
And I’ll be giving rush a series of beatings. .
. .that’ll make the Soviets declare war on my ass!
meh
Rush, your verses are wack. . but its not your fault as such
‘Coz how can you expect to spit fire – when vote-wise you CO2 much.
forced like shit. if CO2 was pronounce See zero too much then this would be nice
This battle’ll prolly be a let down. . I should tell voters so they all know
That you droppin’ shit is so common. .
. . we might see a few bitch moves also!
nice closer




^really? i find that false because truthfully i bomb vets
if i suck so bad..
that would explain why last week YOU stole MY concept
just a statement. do somethin creative w/ it
this a easy task. It’s nothing cuz I run past geeks
yeah, you got skill..
but what happened when out of THREE you won ONE last week?
stop w/ the statements
i dump niggas in ditches, i don't need a reason so..
i'ma get rid of Nick at Night, like cancellin the TV show
Lmao
i'm like baseball with my lines. everything he Red, Sox this kid
it's like defeating NY b-ball teams.. cuz i'm droppin Knicks
plaaaayed
St. Nick is stubborn w/ toys, my telekinesis will hover this boy
it makes Cents how Nick’le get pressed by my hands like Government coins
damn played out the ass
this dude is hopeless, peeps like me, you like fake drugs – bogus
call me a Dime. cuz it'll take two Nicks to equal my dopeness
no
face it i'm slayin ya rhymes, ya washed up like hangin with tides
when it comes to the winner, no one will PicNic.. cuz my reign is outside
witty i like this. pretty creative


well.....there were 2 lines i liked from each competitor but i gotta go w/ nick on this one. even though his 1st 2 lines didnt even rhyme (wtf?) his verse was still much more creative. rush lingo had too much played shit.

once again
v/ nick
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Old 06-06-06, 08:13 PM   #20
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Yeh, 7-0... appreciate the votes...


....and yeh maks, that CO2 punch was forced, but if it was put any other way then most people if not all people would not understand it. they have to have it shoved into their face... as for those first two bars, in my accent they both rhyme... otherwise i would've never dropped them, ya know... but everyone else thought they rhymed to so its all good... just them accents fuck you up sumtimes.
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Old 06-06-06, 10:30 PM   #21
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you dont pronounce it c zero 2....you say SEE OWE TWO....which is why i think its dope
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Old 06-07-06, 08:39 AM   #22
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
Yeh, 7-0... appreciate the votes...


....and yeh maks, that CO2 punch was forced, but if it was put any other way then most people if not all people would not understand it. they have to have it shoved into their face... as for those first two bars, in my accent they both rhyme... otherwise i would've never dropped them, ya know... but everyone else thought they rhymed to so its all good... just them accents fuck you up sumtimes.


yea i figured as much lol
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Old 06-07-06, 09:35 AM   #23
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I didn't think it was that close. Yeah concept-wise they were kinda equal, but Nick worded his better, Rush, had a lotta "like" lines which are inherently weaker. The Excel line woulda been nice except Excel's a spreadsheet not a database proggy, lol. And the CO2 punch was pretty creative just not THAT hard hitting cos of the wording


Nickel line was nice from Rush

just felt like droppin feed, heh
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Old 06-07-06, 10:15 PM   #24
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^Uh, so why is my excel program a database program. Do I have some sort of limited edition shit ? lol.
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Old 06-08-06, 09:44 PM   #25
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You ain’t on my level, and its your wackness that’s the cause
I mean, I lost twice last week bro. .
. .and still came out with a better record than yours.
You a hardcore battler, well I’m a pool player mate
But I don’t need to be given a cue, to fucking sink the number 8
Rush is all gung-ho, but the truth is he won’t do well
‘Coz I could give him a database of personals. .
. .and you’d still never see him Excel!
Rush, your verses are wack. . but its not your fault as such
‘Coz how can you expect to spit fire – when vote-wise you CO2 much.
This battle’ll prolly be a let down. . I should tell voters so they all know
That you droppin’ shit is so common. .
. . we might see a few bitch moves also!


vs

^really? i find that false because truthfully i bomb vets
if i suck so bad..
that would explain why last week YOU stole MY concept
this a easy task. It’s nothing cuz I run past geeks
yeah, you got skill..
but what happened when out of THREE you won ONE last week?
'm like baseball with my lines. everything he Red, Sox this kid
it's like defeating NY b-ball teams.. cuz i'm droppin Knicks
face it i'm slayin ya rhymes, ya washed up like hangin with tides
when it comes to the winner, no one will PicNic.. cuz my reign is outside

overall, pretty tight battle. But Rush went overboard with all the nick name plays. not a bad verse tho. had some tight shit too. Nick just kept with the usal ill shit. dude getting better every week it seems. Really liked your verse. good shit. I think you got this by a bit

v/Nick
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Old 06-08-06, 11:16 PM   #26
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And that is 8-0... and btw Spul.. your verse was FUCKING GAY!!

Lol, you idiot... you may lose that battle.
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Old 06-10-06, 05:47 PM   #27
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m a school bully yo, the biggest motherfucker in my class
And I’ll be giving rush a series of beatings. .
. .that’ll make the Soviets declare war on my ass!
You a hardcore battler, well I’m a pool player mate
But I don’t need to be given a cue, to fucking sink the number 8
vs.
face it i'm slayin ya rhymes, ya washed up like hangin with tides
when it comes to the winner, no one will PicNic.. cuz my reign is outside
^^
alot of ya namplays seemed forced. like this one, but w/e.. def a good battle by both
really stupid close battle in my eyes, but if its that close the bigger names ganna win
vote- nick
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Old 06-10-06, 11:33 PM   #28
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There was too much to quote in this battle. Both had really good verses. and out of all the ones I read this week i would put this as top battle of the week. But anyways Both had great quotables and pretty much each of their verses was hard hitting

V/Nick veres gave me more O's than Rush lingo.

So Nick Wins
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Old 06-10-06, 11:49 PM   #29
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10-0...

...I think this battle is done and dusted now.
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Old 06-11-06, 08:10 AM   #30
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Nick Fletcher wins 10-0.

Nick Fletcher wins (7-4)
Rush Lingo loses (5-5)
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