Replied to: Cracked Smile & Imaginal Decrypting


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{Heaven's Demon}

Yall don’t see what I see, what I breathe, what I’m forced to believe
What only I can conceive, consumed with disease, I’m terminally ill
Ice flows through my veins yet I’m never on chill stay heated, stay pissed
Stay aggravated, end conversations with my fist, anguish is a state of bliss
Clenched tight, swinging, bringing me victories with consequences,
Conflicts I’m a vernacular vandal; fuckers couldn’t hold me down with handles
Talk ta death, my alter ego interrupts, I'm hot glaciers couldn't put frost to me
It's constantly, blowing my head up, the concept of me not being #1 is lost ta me
Sufferer of STDs cause I’m Severely Talented and Deadly, quite frankly
Melee with this M.C., I’ll leave ya decapitated with mic stuck in ya neck
Cause I’ll bless you, encase you in cement just to impress you
Tell the coroner fuck examining the body you should see what I put his vest through
I guess you… didn’t know that I’ve mastered my flow
When I piss on all yall… I never hit the bowl, all net never rim all hole
And snatch ya soul cause I can, and fa know other reason (rees-san)

What did I do to deserve this?
Terminal to the point I wouldn't be worst off with slit wrists
I'm looking death if the face flashing a smile screaming kiss this
(what the fuck)
What did I do to deserve this?
Terminal to the point I wouldn't be worst off with slit wrists
I'm looking death if the face flashing a smile screaming kiss this
(Stupid bitch!!)

{Unforgivable C.I.N.}

My life is paradox, stuck in limbo wit Demonz and beheaded Warlox//
deadly like a case of small pox, anthrax havin all of Hip Hop's pores locked//
manifested as a beast wit that Triple 6 tatted on my halo, disturbin//
unnervin issues flow thru my mind like decayin skin tissues, deservin//
any mistreatment cause the lack of knowledge to find a cure//
and rippin away any superficial intelligence infestin my breed is a chore//
unsure of why most niggaz wanna test the B.O.I. bloodline within I//
the Hellz Angel, Dream Shatterer similar to Pun befo he died//
alot of souls cry fo mercy from a God wit muted ears//
disputed fears run thru those who've crossed us within the years//
Terminally, removed from civilian life and placed under severe observation//
tryin to understand my mental penetration, but unknown is what they facin//
like the boss on Tekken Tag, I have demonz hangin over my shoulders//
and erri minute of erri hour of erri day my blood turns a tad bit colder//
spread germz like colds fluz and otha diseased passed within the masses//
I tend to take my deadliness to classes and find out where the stash is//
the Titanz clashin, Osmosis Jones vs. Lucifer who you think gonna win//
my spirit has never been lifted due to I'm caught in a "down" wind//
and the breeze passin across my upper torso is heated by brimstone//
heartrate barely noticeable to human technology, leave it alone//
let me die in peace or shall I say live in torture, find me sufferin//
within the bloodstream of a nigga left infected by the Omega virus//
and when you look deep into the iris of the beast you wont see no surprises//
the War~God has arisen and chosen the darken path, became a legion//
amongst the dark clouds known for bringin Apocalypse, ask Kontradiction//
we've reck havoc on niggaz in mobbz claimin they a Prodigy child, subscription//
into a jaded diction got them several doses of a illegal prescription//
of somebody Terminally ILL, leavin my name on ya Halo, read the inscription//

What did I do to deserve this?
Terminal to the point I wouldn't be worst off with slit wrists
I'm looking death if the face flashing a smile screaming kiss this
(what the f**k)
What did I do to deserve this?
Terminal to the point I wouldn't be worst off with slit wrists
I'm looking death if the face flashing a smile screaming kiss this
(Stupid b!tch!!)

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This was alright i guess. It looks more of a track on a CD rather than an OM, but i guess you can do this too.

My life is paradox, stuck in limbo wit Demonz and beheaded Warlox//
deadly like a case of small pox, anthrax havin all of Hip Hop's pores locked//
manifested as a beast wit that Triple 6 tatted on my halo, disturbin//
unnervin issues flow thru my mind like decayin skin tissues, deservin//
any mistreatment cause the lack of knowledge to find a cure//
and rippin away any superficial intelligence infestin my breed is a chore//
unsure of why most niggaz wanna test the B.O.I. bloodline within I//
the Hellz Angel, Dream Shatterer similar to Pun befo he died//

Ah, cool analogies here bruh, your concepts were pretty cool. If this was supposed to be a track, then is pretty good overall. just add a different flow to it in some lines to switch up the tempo a bit. keeping the same flow throughout the piece is boring and played as fuck.

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Mankind is just a fable.