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Old 11-23-05, 05:01 AM   #1
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boo @ the indians intro... you'd hate to see a native hand you your ass in audio wouldn't you... The rest of the track is decent. Audio quality sounds like you spittin thru a tin can... hook is aight... Flow is aiight on first verse. Crossed over like Iverson line was aight. Will appears verse is good. Quality still ass, but I don't remember her flowin this good before. Some elevation happenin word. Broken down like Patrick Ewings knees line was gold LOL. sheeeeit.... yea - track was ok... word.

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Old 11-23-05, 09:51 PM   #2
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boo @ the indians intro... you'd hate to see a native hand you your ass in audio wouldn't you... The rest of the track is decent. Audio quality sounds like you spittin thru a tin can... hook is aight... Flow is aiight on first verse. Crossed over like Iverson line was aight. Will appears verse is good. Quality still ass, but I don't remember her flowin this good before. Some elevation happenin word. Broken down like Patrick Ewings knees line was gold LOL. sheeeeit.... yea - track was ok... word.

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lol.... my great grandmother is fullblood cherokee... so basicalyy, i'd be handing my own ass to ....myself...lol

and wow@intermental.... LV?...lmao... try IG... as in Ill Grammatix...lol
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Old 11-23-05, 02:11 PM   #3
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iite peepin...lmfao at the intro...lol...hook is pretty nice...LV..listenin to ure bit...flow is hot...quality is ok...underground shit...real solid...lyrics are hot...lol at the hook again..but this is hot...aiite wil a peer...quality is good...voice is good for a female for a rapper..coolade line is dope...this shit is impressive...flow is hot....i liked this track..8/10..hlla atca nigga..one
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Old 11-23-05, 02:15 PM   #4
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that was ill gramatix lol but good looks vote hot if you like it
alright ill be leaving feed today
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Old 11-24-05, 01:44 AM   #5
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playing.

intro weird. First verse is good, vocals somewhat to high..maybe equalize them a bit more. flow is good,lyrics are okay.

beat is okay.nothing to special.


willa baby, you took my advice you sounding like a sexy female now. Not a premature little boy. this is nice drop gurl. Flow is solid. Voice sounds good. Lyrics are ok.

outro is meh

best thing ive heard from willa. Never heard anything from other guy.

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Old 11-24-05, 02:53 PM   #6
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LMAO@LIL INDIAN THINGY HAHAHAAHAH

I.G-First Change Your Name Back

Emotion Was Koo

Flow Was On Point Great

Delivery Was Fire

Presence Was Good

Welll Fuck The Rest Its All DOpe

Haha


Willa:

EMotion Was Doep

Flows Different But I Love Em

Voice Is Koo

Presence Is Good Seem Confident

Deliverys Dope Love How You Presented Your Self On This

Lyrics Are Good

keep Up

Overall:9/10

Plz Rtf On:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=215164&page=1

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Old 11-24-05, 05:35 PM   #7
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alrite i think i got everyone except for phenom im wiating for him to drop his new track
and the prophecy is a homo
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Old 11-27-05, 04:59 PM   #8
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wtf is that at the beginning.....but besides that this track is a solid one tho.....Lyrics are coo...Flow is on point. And the quality could be a lil better but its coo tho. You got nice mic presence and you sound real confident on the mic. Girl nice on the track....delivery is good..Im feelin the hook its catchy and its somethin i could hear on the radio only if the quality was a lil better....good shit tho..
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Old 11-27-05, 10:11 PM   #9
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wtf is that at the beginning.....but besides that this track is a solid one tho.....Lyrics are coo...Flow is on point. And the quality could be a lil better but its coo tho. You got nice mic presence and you sound real confident on the mic. Girl nice on the track....delivery is good..Im feelin the hook its catchy and its somethin i could hear on the radio only if the quality was a lil better....good shit tho..

no doubt... i know quality is till an issue but i got nothing but time to fix that...lol... thanx for da feed... holla at my mad dog battle and leave some detailed feed on who you think won.... holla
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Old 12-29-05, 08:58 PM   #10
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sick intro, and i'm feelin the hook and beat......damn @ the 1st verse, pretty good..... listenin, now i think the hook is kinda simple, but that's not too bad in this case...... lol, Willa's voice is still sexy..... awww...... Willa, u coulda came harder than that babe...... 1st verse was better....... umm..... overall hot track but quality could be better.....
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Old 12-29-05, 09:30 PM   #11
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yea we got weak quality stick mics lol
im going to upload the first version fo this later cause i dont liek hte effect on my verse
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Old 12-30-05, 01:29 AM   #12
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Ig... nice shit.... good flow.... quality sucks.... lyrics coo.... got coo flow..... your voic coo......... this beat aiight..... ain't the greatest....... take my shine, nice chorus.... likin' hook goof shit...

will, you getting better everytime I hear you. Quality still wack lol but your flow getting better. Good lyrics. good flowing and shit. Liking this.. real nice. Overall was real nice verse.

overall, shit was good listen quality was downfall, othe shit was all there. good track guys. keep it up. 8.5/10
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Old 01-11-06, 04:19 PM   #13
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Willa!!

Don't know if you remember me, but I was on here a whillllleeee ago..

I listened to the take my shine track..

I liked it, fuck what the others say, I was loving ya flow...
Ya voice is real nice too, you improved from when I was here, we was supposed to do that collab.... Nice shit forreal...

The dudes verse was nice as shit too, his flow is crazy, if his quality was better, his shit would have been flawless no doubt...

I'm glad to see you still standin tall ma...
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Old 01-16-06, 01:14 AM   #14
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must agree best track to ever hear willa peer on ..and dude gram shined like always lyrics were dope..willa flow was on point to a T good ish. Still dont like you but good shit..Gram my nigga quality aint everything fuck that shit i got the same problems and u know dat but the lyrics were seepin thru soo i know im late replyin to this i listened to it a few times actually before this post lol..But im posting now just to get a link lol ...But ne who dope track..what ever happened to the Rap game tourney ne ways?> there hasnt been a post since christmas.
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Old 01-16-06, 04:14 AM   #15
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its over
i finished 3rd i took myself out
will s unyu 2nd
kool kol b 1st
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