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06-25-05, 11:59 AM | #1 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
The females of today are all two sided
they try to hide it but ladies, you don't have to deny it. it's like their bipolar, because on day they cooking sweets and the next, they sitting on thier kness. I'm perplexed and confused how they abuse the male generation saying they love you, but only want your money, that's a frustration it doesn't take a police inspection to show that females want the wealthy sensation the good side of her will be nice to you go on dates and wont cheat, she'll be true to you eat cheap food, and then bounce in a few we as males have to protect our pockets because her dialect will have our body out of its sockets find yourself all alone, begging for money while she on the phone in the mansion, drinking expensive tea with honey why do you think men can never figure out the ladies because some just want dough, while others actually want babies. |
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06-27-05, 06:17 AM | #2 | ||
Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP:
ok this was a good battle, alot of emotion and feeling.. ok ill get into this... Macca - having the whole good girls, bad girls verses set out was a dope idea, i liked that, your verse flowed really well, i liked the whole concept behind your verse, when i first red the topic i was a bit iffy, but both of you were able to show the topic to your full extent, macca, your structure was very gud, no flaws, as i said the emotion and feeling you put into your verse was good.. Iggy - your verse was alot very good, the emotion and feeling wasnt as good as Maccas, your structure needs a bit of work, the flow was good though, didnt fall of except shallowed a bit at the ending.. overall this was a good topical battle but i think im going to have to give this battle to Macca.. no hate.. props to both of you!
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