neur.......... elevate man, you had elemntary rhymes and no creativity
overall your shit was weak, and short
and apparently you dont know what 5 bars is.....
my advice,,,,,,,, elevate man, it was pretty wack, you seem to be like 10 years old to me

accomplshment............ it was aight
nothing special but still way better ina ll categories
but i liked the diabetes line, that wasnt too bad

you crushedd this dude man, you should get into elevated front lines

v/accom, but there is always room to improve

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stay true, cuzez