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01-27-04, 12:26 PM | #1 | |||||||
...Fuck With That!
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Dirt Off Your Shoulder Remix
IP: 58A8 E4ED
This is unfinished, but I need feedback. I still have to do another verse. I wanted to see wut yall thought so far b4 i did another verse tho. I tried to flip this beat to a different topic. And no I'm not a wannabe thug. This is actually on some real anger shit that I needed to get off my chest.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/opeymusic.htm Feedback?
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01-27-04, 02:13 PM | #2 | ||||||
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*listening*
hook is funny...nice...lyrics are nice nothing bad i can say about that... start ad libing...some of the voice overs sound a little distorted but that could be soundclick...maybe show a bit more emotion nice shit man keep it up |
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01-27-04, 05:14 PM | #3 | |||||||
A cold killa
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IP: 101E D839
nice drop
im loving this beat wish tim would make a beat for me lol
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01-27-04, 05:45 PM | #4 | ||||||
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the chorus is hot...Lyrics are nice....quality is good....adlibs would make it hotter but was never a fan of adlibs...nice work
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01-27-04, 11:26 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 30C9 A5F9
Lol That Chorus Was Hot
The Lyrics Were Boring But You Had A Nice Flow. Decent Track. |
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01-28-04, 08:32 AM | #6 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: 932A D079
This was semi hard to understand...lyrical content was really sub-par...I understand its a commercial track but ehhh...I don't like the beat...just isn't my style...delivery is kinda annoying...Flow is consistent...Not bad mun...Keep it up...Pz...
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01-28-04, 05:07 PM | #7 | |||||||||
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IP: A37E 9D4C
when you said "turn that beat up" was someone actualy there to turn the beat up, or were you just sounding cool? j/w
hook - cool, i like flow - wow, real simple lyrics - below average voice and quality were coo enough hmm i dunno, i guess i just expected more
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01-28-04, 05:34 PM | #8 | ||||||||
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IP: 1BC7 40A3
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just soundin cool lol. actually i just couldnt think of an intro for shit so i just went with it
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01-28-04, 07:45 PM | #9 | ||||||||||
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lol word
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01-28-04, 09:07 PM | #10 | ||||||
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listenin.. this was hot.. but my mixtape is cancelled opey.. thnx for the time..
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01-29-04, 02:05 AM | #11 | |||||||
...Fuck With That!
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IP: 1BC7 40A3
you fuckin hoe lol. o well i'll still finish it and just post the finished version on here then. no harm no foul
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01-29-04, 04:58 AM | #12 | ||||
Eddy.
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IP: 77D5 6AAD
This was nice, .. beat was catchy, like it suposed to be, .. lyrical content fitted the beat in my opinon , i enjoyed listenening to it, .. nice remixed, w/ the splivit shout out, nice-ness .. *Want to hear the song when its finished ..*
Nice one Opey Dokey o.O I want ur cd Can I have your babies too?? please?
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Fuck you Last edited by ...OpeY... : 01-29-04 at 05:13 AM. |
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01-29-04, 05:06 AM | #13 | |||||||
...Fuck With That!
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IP: 1BC7 40A3
send me $8 and i'll send u a cd. or u can try to dl it from kazaa but i'll tell the RIAA on u... BIATCH!
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01-29-04, 05:10 AM | #14 | ||||
Eddy.
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where can i send it?? will u autograph it for me? youre my hero
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Fuck you Last edited by ...OpeY... : 01-29-04 at 05:12 AM. |
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01-29-04, 05:13 AM | #15 | ||||
Eddy.
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Strange everything is editted by Opey .. ~ I Wonder..o.O
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