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Old 01-13-04, 06:45 PM   #1
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My Last 24 Hours...

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Write about what you would do with your last 24 hours of life. Six Line minimum and try to be creative. I do not want the same I'll have sex with my girl type crap.

OK, this is a trial run here. If this works out well I will keep it as a cypher.

Remember this Cypher is
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Old 01-13-04, 09:16 PM   #2
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In my last 24 hours i'd try to do the world good
doing things for people, that i know i never would
but who knows, i don't really think bout it that much
maybe i'd do something crazy ass shit, just for the rush
or maybe i wouldn't even do shit, except let the time pass
say my goodbye's to my friends and family, cause it'd be my last

i dunno wasn't very good ah well,
lets see some more people drop in here
it'll be interesting to see what people would do
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Old 01-13-04, 09:35 PM   #3
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My finale 24 hours what shall i do
Shall i test the limits of life, see whats really true?
Shall i test my mental strength, be a Meditational Guru
Will i tell my friends goodbye..."ill be waiting for you"
I will write a Novel, and title it "The Last Days"
Tell my whole damn story word for word
The final minutes of the Last life
the finale tribute to my lost strife
A finale fuck you to the world
A huge middle finger for every boy a girl
Then smoke my self silly and just chill
Smog out my coffin, got to keep it real
So when i get to heaven ill already be soarin
And when the door opens, ill let the smoke poor in
Hell any day could be your last
So i guess i better not let mine pass....

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Old 01-14-04, 03:27 AM   #4
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the last hours of my life would be awfully nice,
maybe i'd change my ways up, for once do what was right
no worrys bout tryin to change my passed actions and demeaner,
may go buck wild for a minute, steal a benz or a beamer
no point in sayin goodbye cause none would be sufficient
probablly be prayin to the lord, but this time No bullshittin
waiting for my second to descend from this earthly place,
hope god can forgive my instances ive fallen from grace
 
Old 01-14-04, 06:48 AM   #5
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living da last 24 hours knowing its ma last day b4 i pass away
my time on dis planet is up, saving ma last breath to say wot i want
waiting for ma last smoke, ma last coke, ma last choke
spending ma last dollar before going broke
saying goodbye to ma homies, i'll see you wen u die
i'll be up dere waiting, heaven's where i'll reside
to ma gurlz i'd juz gotta say i love ya
to alot of ya, gotta say i gonna hate not to shrug ya
but i'll be watching ya, from right up above ya
and i know ya'll will miss ma lame attempts to bug ya
going for one last drive through da late night
smoking da shit, seemingly high, fuk da law
coz im bout to die....drive off da top of da building
screaming out good bye
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Old 01-14-04, 07:52 AM   #6
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My last 24 hours.. I'd have words, say goodbye to my closest peeps
Get wrecked up... do a Bickle... and be gunnin' for local creeps
A final session with my girl... sky dive... or maybe a bungee jump
Leave my savings to the homeless and people down in the dumps
Random acts of kindness.. commiting crimes 'gainst the deserved
Things un-thought of in normal life.. since my place above is reserved
 
Old 01-14-04, 11:10 AM   #7
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In my last 24 hours....hit all the bitches who i claimed to be cowards
i devour, spit the hottest verse, for my peoples in hearse
it gets worse, cuz these last hours is more critical then my first
when i'm gone, the whole universe gets destroyed with the BLACK CURSE
the last 24, livin seconds to the fullest
take back all shots, and the unamed bullets
cuz in the last 24, i'll let the clip go, and let my ghost pull it


EDIT: So far this cypher seems to be a good addition. I like the drops in here, you guy's are doing a good job on it. It's very interesting reading what everyone would do with thier last 24. I hope to see more heat dropped in here, keep up the good work people.....
~Bounce~
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Old 01-15-04, 11:09 AM   #8
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24 hours left to fulfill my every single hope and aspiration
so as time winds down, there's just no time for hesitation
have to pass on the knowledge, that i've seen as keen
and make sure people understand just exactly what i mean
because my life may fade out, but my voice remains to be heard
so hopefully friends and fam can learn something from my words
leave this world at peace, making sure that i have no regrets
only to move on and explore the next life, cuz it's a better bet
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Old 01-15-04, 05:10 PM   #9
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Given a day to live, looks like time in the hour glass passed
It's time to look above, look to god and pray not 2 b cast
To da pit of slime n mire, but 2 da place my mothr can admire
Away from da realm of fire, Mayb angels looking 4 a new hire
People rush around and its funny to watch them accumulate
da wealth but i laugh cuz i know u cant hold it at heavens gate
Instead i spend my life wisely with the people who i call family
Praying and knowing faithfully, saint peter is waiting patiently

(Just wanted to say this is a good cypher to bad youll nvr no
when death is coming. so you just got to live every day like
it you last.)
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17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish
 
Old 01-15-04, 06:02 PM   #10
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One day to live, one shot to let off//
Kill all ya haterz and I'll never go soft//
Make sure I stay a solider, til the last minute//
C'mon any mutha fuckers want it? come get it//
I will keep all my promises, make sure my life was worth it//
Write all my feelings on this paper, even if they ain't perfect//
No one and nothing is ever, but I'ma try//
Even if this is 'the day,' the one that I die//
But I'm gonna get seriuos, I do have many regrets//
None I could ever tell, but you probably could guess//
I said in my life, "I will take it to my grave," I tryed my best//
Some promises I broke, but I can succeed, only 24 hours left//
Like that one song "we all die someday," well now I know//
My day has come, this is probably gonna be my last flow//
This is my 'end of days' and I seem fine about it//
I thought I would be the greatest, but now I doubt it//
All these mixed thoughts runnin' around in my head//
I relize, as I let them all out that I'll soon be dead//
I wish I could just easily let them out on this paper//
Ok, well I think I g2g, I'll try and finsh this shit later//

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Thought it was whack but oo well
 
Old 01-17-04, 01:02 AM   #11
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yo so many things to be said, so many things to understand,
runnin out of time cause the only dead glass im hittin is sand, (hour glass)
seen so many faces, lived to the fullest, what would i do, give me a clip of bullets,
i aint aiming to my enemies, i aint aiming to my friends, imma rip open the ground, and make the time bend,
imma search for the devil, his ass imma take, the next time you feel an earthquake, thats gonna be my victory shake,
i kno im going to hell, but im going to take that thrown, take with me a nuclear war~head~ cause this niggas getting ~blown~
 
Old 01-17-04, 08:35 AM   #12
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during my last 24 hours ill be gunnin my enimies
havem runnin and shaking like parkinson-desease
ill be hoppin on bitches like easter bunnies
living out my dreams and spending my moneys
finally see the sunny side of life before its shunts me
buy a key of punk roll blunts and munch junkies
 
Old 01-17-04, 01:06 PM   #13
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my last 24, i spend it all with my kid
tell her not to make the mistakes, her father done did
i aughta get rid, of the people i hated over the past years
debated on what i have here,in the state of what cash stear
the steering wheel on the bus of life,no time to touch the mike,
good luck tonite , will i see fire or put my trust in the light
heven or hell doesnt matter, all that matters is what i'll leave
and fuck material things,where im going cant have it with me
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Old 01-17-04, 03:49 PM   #14
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Last day wouldn't do much, stop national inflation//
End starvation and poverty around the whole damn nation//
Dream the fuck on, prolly just spend it with my niggas//
Ridin like we always do, pullin knifes and pullin triggas//
Suckin life from wiggas, when I die like fuckin snap//
Chop my body up and hide me, niggaz thats a wrap//
No more rap spillin from my lips...Kronix is gone//
And if I'm wrong ill be like 2pac, play the fuck along//
Hope i aint cos i dont wanna be the next makaveli//
Rumors on the news hittin U.S tv's an english telly's//
An at my funeral niggas dont even bother to mourn//
Don't letcha heart be torn, cos for sure ill be reborn//

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Old 01-19-04, 01:12 PM   #15
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yo my final 24 hours

yo if i had 24 hours to live left/
id run up and take my mac 10 gift set/
run outside and kill all these pests like insects/
id run up in the white house wit a kevlar vest/
16 m-16s, and an ammo chest/
yellin i run this city, ill put you to rest/
screamin like scarface "You cant fuck wit the BEST"/
ill take 1000 bullets to neck and still wreck/
im a mutherfuckin soldier, with an unpaid debt for respect!/

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