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Old 02-02-04, 09:43 PM   #1
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Diss the person above you

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Exactly What The Title Says...

6 Lines MINIMUM

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Old 02-02-04, 10:19 PM   #2
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bouncydoggydog you from la
playa get the fuck out da way
you act all big and tough thinkin you a thug
nigga when u cried when u got bit by a bug
you think you can get chicks
nigga u need brand new kicks
nigga ur a fuckin slob
i'm gonna kill u wit my mob
 
Old 02-02-04, 10:38 PM   #3
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Mc_Merc ... sorry to inform you your skill empty jerk!!
Tempt me worth ... I have you sent beneath the earth ...
Just registered .....under 15 posts tryna get ya game up
But it's easy to see other things besides your name suck!
Your flow is off .... structure could be tweaked here & there....
Who am I kiddin ... you aint even got a punch here nor there...
Simplistic rhymes ... Leave you sick like Lime ...I'm sick wit lines
Rip your mind, brain stripped in time ... only the gifted signed....
If I was to depict your grind .... it's daily dick ryding for no point ...
Cuz you wouldn't win one battle if you gave voters a joint ....
We dont like herbs ... but we do be smokin them trees ....
With the right words ... even the wrong I'm chokin you please ......
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Old 02-03-04, 12:07 AM   #4
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technitons origanal he's in for repair/
this bitch so poor he don't got a dime to spair/
how can i repair sumthing that ain't there/
n i ain't talkin about pussy hair cause it's there/
wait ur verse is half good and have bad wiat i jsut fucked up it's completely sad/
so bad it's makin me mad /
how can ne body call this mc rad/
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Old 02-03-04, 12:21 AM   #5
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I saw ya battle versus freezapop, good god you suck
If I called ya out in bitchslapped ya ss would proly duck
Bitch jus anutha newb tryin ta rep with the best
Put a bullet in ya chest, leave ya wit nuthin less
I kill you so fast you be dead fast
And gas you cause you dun have a mask
 
Old 02-03-04, 12:35 AM   #6
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I beat your spirits ...like a waiter I seat this this Lyric ....
Skills disappearin ...I'm not a magician ur just not allowed near it ...
Not dope enuff to smoke this stuff ...IJL'S hopes are crushed...
They had faith till I spoke this rough ...hell's ropes are touched
Why u front I ghost wrote ur bluff ...Haven't toasted holmes enough
Burn'em like an ant with a magnifying glass ...straight scorth his ass
I support the mass ...people at this site dont like u we deport you fast
I could compile evidence like this was a report from class ...
Why waste a while wen is evident so u should get on forth wit the past ...
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Old 02-03-04, 01:22 AM   #7
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Tech go hang by your neck your not even see as a threat..
You think your a vet i got respect but'll slice you cross your neck..
maybe pull out a tech your your avy's only got a hand GUn...
you'll get hit and left layin on the land son shoulda ran some..
to get out of my range but i release anger on my page..
Takin out Tech with a gage...Takin techknowledy to the next stage....
 
Old 02-03-04, 01:30 AM   #8
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Take this as a note, In battles ur too shit to get votes.
And why the fuck do u have a wack verse as a quote.
Your too shit............Every punch you throw misses.
And what the fuck is a technician doing writing disses?
U could never flip this, Wins from noobs, Dont be proud.
The reason why u never shine, Is cuz ur from a cloud.
Your a discrace, You giving me a loss? No fuckin Way.
You Tried to throw me some punches....
...................But they came back and broke Ya Face.

Edited- This was ment for Technician
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Old 02-03-04, 10:25 AM   #9
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Method couldnt be less blingin if he drove in a car wash
i kicked this guy so high he finnaly found out what a star was
i spit like tattoos i permantly mark feelings and ya flesh
i mean when ya suck oxygen in ya breathin still aint fresh
ya battle record dont say shit cause half them beaten was yurself
yu come in second n e way and went yu enter..yu greetin yaself
 
Old 02-03-04, 10:42 AM   #10
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u talk mad shit yo punk ass ain't real
up on dis bitch cause u can't get a deal
yeah ya rap style is whack
if i ever see u i'll put a gun to yo back
cause i'm MX lil nigga known for holdin da chrome
find out where u live den run in ya home
 
Old 02-03-04, 11:21 AM   #11
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u say kats is on here cuz they can't get a deal
well i guess we kno what happened wit ur rap career
they said sorry but your wack,oh and umm.. plz don't call us back so
u say your known fa holdin tha chrome but in the end u'll be runnin into your own home
so sit back relax put up yor feet, cuz most will admit that ur already beat,
once i find out where u ya sleep
 
Old 02-03-04, 11:32 AM   #12
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yo

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this is gonna be quick
my rhymes theyre so fly they click
like the sound of my glock when youre runnin down ya block
you actin all hard like you wanna say somethin well you can quit that baby shit you can quit mean muggin ya i said it was quick and i meant what i said so if you wanna talk shit just write back yo biz
 
Old 02-03-04, 12:33 PM   #13
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you rhymes is elementary like quotes from sherlock holmes.
what a dawg doin rappin. should be somewhere slobbin on bones.
come on now c-dawg-lady you tell me you must be ugly.
mistook for a monkey when you folks pushed you round in a buggie.
how you get that monkey in them clothes a teach it to walk.
got passerbys havin wrecks. tryin to catch grown gorillas talk.
i would gone in punch but i aint got the strength to fight primates.
just throw you a bananna packed inside with razor blades.
swallow that main. so they cut your insides up like box cutters.
knowin yo life is now ending. you get sad your heart flutters.
i'll be convicted of cruelty to animals by the a-s-p-c-a
the judge will say in court don't treat animals that way.
 
Old 02-03-04, 06:24 PM   #14
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Dallas rap ain't nothin' but crap you should go back and smoke crack cuz ya verse is wack
I don't gotta try, but I gonna lie, you should be embarrased by ya battle record cuz ya already dropped two
I know I have two, but at least I've won more than one, When I'm done youll be run
That's right run outta town, cuz my verse is down, I'm a killa clown fuck that I ain't IJL
I'm PSA, Fuck a-s-p-c-a, I'll k-i-doulbe-l-y-a, Leave ya resignin' like Marino in M-I-A
Why do have a avy of a hand grenade, I'll pick that up, throw it back, Wait... BANG
Bury your body parts with a space, throwin' ya gut, Smokie sum crack, Wait... DANG
Your dead, it's over, sorry ya neva even got head, I'll treat ya like a jew and put ya in my oven
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Old 02-03-04, 06:28 PM   #15
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Yo ua rhymes are garbage
You spit real retarded
Look at my rhymes and the shit you started
I'm so dope and your broke, goof thing you never battled me
Cause it wouldnt be close, I win easy
Foe sheezy, record 7-2 your still suck
I kick the village pimp in da nuts. Whatsup
 
 


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