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String9487 | 0 | 0% | |
.:Jack Rackam:. | 5 | 100.00% | |
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11-12-04, 08:00 PM | #1 |
New Jack
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String9487 vs .:Jack Rackam:.
IP: C837 AA17
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11-12-04, 08:13 PM | #2 | |
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IP: C837 AA17
.:Jack Rackam:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 08:13 PM.
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11-12-04, 08:16 PM | #3 | |
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IP: B9AB 64CC
String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 08:16 PM.
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11-12-04, 08:42 PM | #4 |
New Jack
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IP: C837 AA17
Your juiced n thick son..! well look what I got here.!! a noose 4 the fixin RV kno this cat aint real,… battling me …he jus won a Cruise wit fiction, (crucifixion) is string NOT FRAID(afraid)..?, kid you aint lucky like rare charms..! i rip ya skin from ya fingers to ya shoulder blades so you can really bare/arms, Deaths close tonight as Times tick’n quick like watches with speedy lice, You Wanna spit nice n tight… try clampin down n spitten from a vice, u get’in decked! Like ya shufflin-next, this nerd could never match my text, cuz in this battle hes to curved n exed like a granny in a wet t-shirt contest, geek is it a lesson you seek,? trust me i was jus flexin my physique start confessin ya gay..!.its S.O.S. cuz this mans got .'Shit-On his Sheik' |
11-12-04, 08:42 PM | #5 |
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IP: B9AB 64CC
STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!
eh yo, u try n "nail me"..then ima snatch off ya cuticle put Jack in the "box" like its an office cubicle u wind up badly jumped, dis chicken i'd gladly pluck cuz to me, dis dude spit worse than DAFFY DUCK homie u aint hot,... to hell with u and ya punches wouldnt even stick wit Elmers glue ya idea's aint grounded dog , they just flyin n shit Call u Mr Planters, cuz u NUTS tryin to spit u cant see cuz ya terminally blind, this match is verbally mine cuz Jack, ya flow look like u and Jill's nursery rhymes....HAAAA |
11-12-04, 08:44 PM | #6 |
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IP: B9AB 64CC
uppin for votes holla at ya boy wit an honest opinion n they will b returned if u pm me
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11-12-04, 08:56 PM | #7 |
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.
punches-Jack took this with his more witty puunches and his hit alot harder flow-jack takes this... his just flowed alot better jack-your pucnes was good... they hit hard and they ws witty...your personals hit him hard aswell...your flow was good and your structure i liked aswell string...wasnt really feeling your verse that much man... your flow was okay but i was nt feeling your punches or your personal... elevate a lil bit and keep trying man |
11-12-04, 09:03 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 7278 812B
Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.
.:Jack Rackam:. - Good spit dawg, you had a good flow.. and your punches were hitten hard. Best Line - u get’in decked! Like ya shufflin-next, this nerd could never match my text, cuz in this battle hes to curved n exed like a granny in a wet t-shirt contest, Worst Line - Deaths close tonight as Times tick’n quick like watches with speedy lice, You Wanna spit nice n tight… try clampin down n spitten from a vice String - iight spit, you had an ok flow.. and some good punches. Best Line - u wind up badly jumped, dis chicken i'd gladly pluck cuz to me, dis dude spit worse than DAFFY DUCK Worst Line - eh yo, u try n "nail me"..then ima snatch off ya cuticle put Jack in the "box" like its an office cubicle OVERALL - an OK battle, with the winner being .:Jack Rackam:. he had the better flow.. and his wordplay was better same wit his punches. String your punches were good to just try and add some personals and up your flow. Vote - .:Jack Rackam:. RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159745
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11-12-04, 09:07 PM | #9 |
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IP: B9AB 64CC
uppin for votes holla at ya boy wit an honest opinion n they will b returned if u pm me
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11-12-04, 09:55 PM | #10 |
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.
Wow, hella one sided battle, Anybody using Daffy Duck in there rhyme, especialy like that, really dno't have a chance to win. Rackem, you had some dope punches in there and some good wordplay. String, punches were basic, not hard hitting, and structure was ass. Jack Rackem got this No Doubt.
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11-13-04, 02:38 AM | #11 | |
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Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.
aight, Jack Rackam came WAY harder than String this couldn't be more one-sided.. your wordplay was nice creativity was good, flow was also good fell off once towards the end.. the closer was alright.. but the multis and vocab was a good combo.. the first bar was enough to take over in this battle.. if sumone says otherwise, then sumthin's wrong.. String u had sum attempts with metas but u lacked the other catergories.. this should be a TKO.. my vote/ Jack Rackam-- and i don't know him so it's not a hate vote..
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11-13-04, 04:08 AM | #12 | |
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.
Easy battle man.. Rackam took the win, better flow, better multies, better disses, vocab.. String, short lines dont make things flow. Also: eh yo, u try n "nail me"..then ima snatch off ya cuticle put Jack in the "box" like its an office cubicle ^That isnt really a diss... Thats why you need to elevate and look at his weaknesses, and make diss punches about them instead of just normal rap punchlines.. Get what I mean? |
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