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Vango 3 100.00%
GKillaz05 0 0%
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Old 12-16-04, 11:52 PM   #1
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9. Vango Vs. 26. GKillaz05

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Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

12 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

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Old 12-17-04, 12:22 AM   #2
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checkin in............
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Old 12-17-04, 09:43 AM   #3
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check............................................. .
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Old 12-21-04, 12:52 PM   #4
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All I gotta do is pull up to this battle and watch his Van Go...
You cant handle this weight like your name was Anna Nicole...
Battling you is like flow givin me an advance to next round card...
Poppin lyrical steroids couldnt even make your text sound hard...
You fear me cuz ya cant hear me clearly bitch only has one ear...
Im havin' fun here just gotta appear and this pussy will run clear...
I aint lyin' to you, your whack - what are you tryin to do...
Every click is denyin' you thats why your buying a crew...*
Fuck battling this pussy anyways I want this to be a boxing match...
Then we will see how much this pussy ass bitch be talkin back...
Walkin' Whack, Whats With Wannabe Wigger Writers...
Those are the only W you goin to see, unless you be a biter...

he has a post tryin to buy a crew
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Old 12-21-04, 05:39 PM   #5
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Twelve lines to destroy this faggot, no need I can end this battle in eight
Your making all of RV bulimic, we read your text and then we regurgitate
I see by your avy you like weed, consider my punches chronic to the chest
Gkillaz I knew that you was slow, but really studying 5 days for a urine test?
I peeped your verses kid, there extra light on the punches heavy on the fillers
I figured if I tied Wheaties to your waist, at least then you'd be a Cereal Killer
You remind me of candy kid, cuz I could really take you out "Now or Later"
Man you couldn't get a party pumped with cocaine and a pocket defibrillator *
It's like the twelve days of xmas and on the 10th day RV gave to me
A kid whose got no chance of winning, just a fake eminem wannabe
So like Em said "There's no denying my weenie is much bigger than yours
Mine is like sticking a banana between your mamas tits, killa keep the oranges

*defibrillator is what hospitals use to start your heart back up (two paddles that they rub together)

blah verse but enough to get this win..................word
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Old 12-21-04, 06:15 PM   #6
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the breakdown

first g killaz


All I gotta do is pull up to this battle and watch his Van Go...
You cant handle this weight like your name was Anna Nicole...
8 haha good punch, bad set line though
Battling you is like flow givin me an advance to next round card...
Poppin lyrical steroids couldnt even make your text sound hard...
7.5 decent, heard an offshoot of it though
You fear me cuz ya cant hear me clearly bitch only has one ear...
Im havin' fun here just gotta appear and this pussy will run clear...
6.5 bad, that's it not even really a punch...played and youre better then this
I aint lyin' to you, your whack - what are you tryin to do...
Every click is denyin' you thats why your buying a crew...*
10 haha, that was good...so funny...
Fuck battling this pussy anyways I want this to be a boxing match...
Then we will see how much this pussy ass bitch be talkin back...
7 blah at best
Walkin' Whack, Whats With Wannabe Wigger Writers...
Those are the only W you goin to see, unless you be a biter...
7.5 set line was good but, and the idea was nice, but the punch could have been worded and alot stronger, this coulda been a big line

Vango
Twelve lines to destroy this faggot, no need I can end this battle in eight
Your making all of RV bulimic, we read your text and then we regurgitate
7.5 blah, not very strong, not witty, vocab ain't all that
I see by your avy you like weed, consider my punches chronic to the chest
Gkillaz I knew that you was slow, but really studying 5 days for a urine test?
9.5 oh snap,,,bam good shit
I peeped your verses kid, there extra light on the punches heavy on the fillers
I figured if I tied Wheaties to your waist, at least then you'd be a Cereal Killer
8 hmm,,,a bit blah, kinda stretching out for a nice concept
You remind me of candy kid, cuz I could really take you out "Now or Later"
Man you couldn't get a party pumped with cocaine and a pocket defibrillator
8 well thats decent not really very hard hitting though
It's like the twelve days of xmas and on the 10th day RV gave to me
A kid whose got no chance of winning, just a fake eminem wannabe
8.5 bam thats well worded and pretty hitting
So like Em said "There's no denying my weenie is much bigger than yours
Mine is like sticking a banana between your mamas tits, killa keep the oranges
8.5 haha, that was a good punch, although the wording was pretty terrible...

Vote Vango, just a tad better
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Old 12-22-04, 08:38 AM   #7
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good battle fam.. I didnt try becuse I didnt think you were showin.. did post 6 hours after deadline, but s'all good.
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Old 12-22-04, 08:56 AM   #8
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deadline was last night at 11:59, but yeah good battle.
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Old 12-22-04, 09:05 AM   #9
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lol he was in time
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Old 12-22-04, 11:59 AM   #10
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All I gotta do is pull up to this battle and watch his Van Go...
You cant handle this weight like your name was Anna Nicole...
I aint lyin' to you, your whack - what are you tryin to do...
Every click is denyin' you thats why your buying a crew...*

Vs.

I see by your avy you like weed, consider my punches chronic to the chest
Gkillaz I knew that you was slow, but really studying 5 days for a urine test?
I peeped your verses kid, there extra light on the punches heavy on the fillers
I figured if I tied Wheaties to your waist, at least then you'd be a Cereal Killer
You remind me of candy kid, cuz I could really take you out "Now or Later"
Man you couldn't get a party pumped with cocaine and a pocket defibrillator
It's like the twelve days of xmas and on the 10th day RV gave to me
A kid whose got no chance of winning, just a fake eminem wannabe
So like Em said "There's no denying my weenie is much bigger than yours
Mine is like sticking a banana between your mamas tits, killa keep the oranges

Vote: Vango for a better verse

Okay i broke it down in my head like i do with all these battles... Vango had the better overall verse although G did have 2 really good bars the rest of them was either average or just not feelin it... while vango on the other hand other then his opener and his bad wording on his closer his whole verse was really solid... he actually suprised me this round... the closer was still good even though the wording was off... Props to both of you on this...
 
Old 12-22-04, 01:36 PM   #11
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All I gotta do is pull up to this battle and watch his Van Go...
You cant handle this weight like your name was Anna Nicole...
stupid simplicite rhyme scheme u tried though ok but no really good
Battling you is like flow givin me an advance to next round card...
Poppin lyrical steroids couldnt even make your text sound hard...
ok played concept though
You fear me cuz ya cant hear me clearly bitch only has one ear...
Im havin' fun here just gotta appear and this pussy will run clear...
no personal stupid
I aint lyin' to you, your whack - what are you tryin to do...
Every click is denyin' you thats why your buying a crew...*
ok personal he just doesnt try put but prob ur best line
Fuck battling this pussy anyways I want this to be a boxing match...
Then we will see how much this pussy ass bitch be talkin back...
dumb no personal something a new b would use lol
Walkin' Whack, Whats With Wannabe Wigger Writers...
Those are the only W you goin to see, unless you be a biter...
simple rhyme scheme had potential to be a really good closer if worded diferently
i felt u lacked good personals vocab


Twelve lines to destroy this faggot, no need I can end this battle in eight
Your making all of RV bulimic, we read your text and then we regurgitate
ok vocab in this line not really funny not a good opener
I see by your avy you like weed, consider my punches chronic to the chest
Gkillaz I knew that you was slow, but really studying 5 days for a urine test?
funny good personal
I peeped your verses kid, there extra light on the punches heavy on the fillers
I figured if I tied Wheaties to your waist, at least then you'd be a Cereal Killer
yea nice concept could ahev been worded a lil better but pretty good funny yet kinda played
You remind me of candy kid, cuz I could really take you out "Now or Later"
Man you couldn't get a party pumped with cocaine and a pocket defibrillator *
funny ok wordplay pretty good
It's like the twelve days of xmas and on the 10th day RV gave to me
A kid whose got no chance of winning, just a fake eminem wannabe
not tht good but it is almost xmas time lol and well it was funny
So like Em said "There's no denying my weenie is much bigger than yours
Mine is like sticking a banana between your mamas tits, killa keep the oranges
that was hilarious lol could be better if worded right yet still dope
u kinda lacked personals too vocab was better u just cam more original thats y im voting for u good job to both
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Old 12-23-04, 06:27 PM   #12
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Closed. Vango wins 4-0.
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